Shhh Dreams Are Dreaming

S tarlit night sky dreams
T o reach for us,
A journey from infinity to finite
I nverse of our dreams,
R eciprocal of zero
W alking down to touch us
A long the starway from the stars;
Y esterdays will be tomorrows
T here will be a reverse journey,
O blivion in the tiny hand of a child,
T ime will be standstill
H ours to minutes to seconds
E very moment frozen to a single eternity.

S tarlit night sky also dreams
T o come down nearer to earth,
A s dreams also dream of us
R eversing our dreaming......

S hhh...dreams are dreaming!



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 Placement: 9th;(Feb. 2012)

Contest:Stairway to the stars

Sponsor:Linda-Marie

By :kash poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Congratulations Kash on the winning placement
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Kash. Love Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 3:15 AM
Congratulations Kash nice one, enjoyed this well done xx
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Congrats Kash on an outstanding win for this excellent entry ..and thankxx for your constant support too luv.
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Hello, Kash!! Just seeing if you had anything new tonight!!
Pemberton Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 9:41 AM
Thank you for your comments and your wonderful poetry too! Blessing to you! JP
Minardi Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 7:29 AM
As dreams also dream of us... Wonderfully written, Kash. Congrats on the win :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 10:12 PM
hmmmm, in my opinion, this was a HIGH STAR.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 9:55 AM
congrats Kash on an HM for this rare beauty poetry luv.. another precious treasure..
Brown Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 6:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "(Any) Poem Of the week" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 4:11 AM
Don't be mad at me for saying this, Kash...sometimes your work is not scored as high as it should...I am waiting to see how well this powerful imaginative acrostic does...I feel as tho I am the small child standing on your spiral staircase watching all these dreams come true..The other great concept you've mastered here is having the two images shake hands and take my mind in a reverse motion! I have to say this is quite profound! Savin' this one for my favs! Gwendolen
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:16 PM
Congratulations on your win Kash. Nice acrostic.
A   Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 10:32 PM
KASH.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 7:50 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Kash. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 1:01 AM
whoo, i was just about to write you, kashi but you pulled a fast one!lol..... sleep first and spin a new song, yes???.. miss your words and concern!..:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 7:30 PM
oh my gosh, this is amazing, Kash. So OUT of the BOX. A big fave for THIS one. It's saying something so creative and unique. I hope to see it way at the top of the winners' list. Luv, Andrea
Maverick Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 2:18 PM
Really enjoyed this Kash, i choose to look at it from the title" now i see its for the same contest i entered, here's wishing you well..)
Horne Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Lovely write, Kash - especially love the clever last line. Many congrats on your wins : )
Neels Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Kash, I see you also used the element of time. Really enjoyed your Acrostic tonight ;)
Austin Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 12:36 PM
A down-to-earth complexity. I like your other-dimensional concept. Love, daver
Ruebel Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Hello Kash Yes, it has been a while, Thank you for all your lovely comments. I love this wonderful Acoustic you have penned here. Just a beautiful story in the telling....Thank you for sharing. Lov, Shar
Onclaud Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:06 AM
a bombardment of heady images, kashi buddy!... such a dreamy write that will sure be in the winning list...:) huggs!.. i have a new one rushed.. come visit if you have time..:)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:42 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Kash.. good luck luv.. am sure will be mesmerized by these lines at judging time.. luv title..
Kearley Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:41 AM
Very impressive here Kash...Nice one!
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