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Shhh Dreams Are Dreaming

S tarlit night sky dreams T o reach for us, A journey from infinity to finite I nverse of our dreams, R eciprocal of zero W alking down to touch us A long the starway from the stars; Y esterdays will be tomorrows T here will be a reverse journey, O blivion in the tiny hand of a child, T ime will be standstill H ours to minutes to seconds E very moment frozen to a single eternity. S tarlit night sky also dreams T o come down nearer to earth, A s dreams also dream of us R eversing our dreaming...... S hhh...dreams are dreaming! ==================== Placement: 9th;(Feb. 2012) Contest:Stairway to the stars Sponsor:Linda-Marie By :kash poet

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Date: 2/28/2012 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations Kash on the winning placement
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Kash. Love Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations Kash nice one, enjoyed this well done xx
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:12:00 PM
Congrats Kash on an outstanding win for this excellent entry ..and thankxx for your constant support too luv.
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:41:00 PM
Hello, Kash!! Just seeing if you had anything new tonight!!
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:41:00 AM
Thank you for your comments and your wonderful poetry too! Blessing to you! JP
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Date: 2/24/2012 7:29:00 AM
As dreams also dream of us... Wonderfully written, Kash. Congrats on the win :)
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Date: 2/23/2012 10:12:00 PM
hmmmm, in my opinion, this was a HIGH STAR.
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:55:00 AM
congrats Kash on an HM for this rare beauty poetry luv.. another precious treasure..
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "(Any) Poem Of the week" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 4:11:00 AM
Don't be mad at me for saying this, Kash...sometimes your work is not scored as high as it should...I am waiting to see how well this powerful imaginative acrostic does...I feel as tho I am the small child standing on your spiral staircase watching all these dreams come true..The other great concept you've mastered here is having the two images shake hands and take my mind in a reverse motion! I have to say this is quite profound! Savin' this one for my favs! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Kash. Nice acrostic.
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:32:00 PM
KASH.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/22/2012 7:50:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:01:00 AM
whoo, i was just about to write you, kashi but you pulled a fast one!lol..... sleep first and spin a new song, yes???.. miss your words and concern!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:30:00 PM
oh my gosh, this is amazing, Kash. So OUT of the BOX. A big fave for THIS one. It's saying something so creative and unique. I hope to see it way at the top of the winners' list. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/21/2012 2:18:00 PM
Really enjoyed this Kash, i choose to look at it from the title" now i see its for the same contest i entered, here's wishing you well..)
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Date: 2/21/2012 2:11:00 PM
Lovely write, Kash - especially love the clever last line. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 2/21/2012 12:55:00 PM
Kash, I see you also used the element of time. Really enjoyed your Acrostic tonight ;)
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Date: 2/21/2012 12:36:00 PM
A down-to-earth complexity. I like your other-dimensional concept. Love, daver
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:12:00 AM
Hello Kash Yes, it has been a while, Thank you for all your lovely comments. I love this wonderful Acoustic you have penned here. Just a beautiful story in the telling....Thank you for sharing. Lov, Shar
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:06:00 AM
a bombardment of heady images, kashi buddy!... such a dreamy write that will sure be in the winning list...:) huggs!.. i have a new one rushed.. come visit if you have time..:)
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:42:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Kash.. good luck luv.. am sure will be mesmerized by these lines at judging time.. luv title..
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:41:00 AM
Very impressive here Kash...Nice one!
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