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) ( ¤ …shh bashit cashit dishit dashit no tp bushit hushit gashit hashit lashit sashit wishit would come now pushit pushit some more lushit don’t rushit you might mashit mushit don't splashit! goshit, too late! ~ouch, fishit rashit tushit gushit washit flush it..
II °° crashit blushit flashit freshit can't brushit can't finishit uhh can't crushit this slushit cherishit Ooh ooh o ¤ ° III sh woo.sh 's it vanishit sheepish it! ** ok this one is still in the works...don't really want to force it Writer’s babble: This has been in my intestines for a loong time now (years actually) but never figured out how to do it. Then *poopboom*! It all got digested and assimilated—the recent sample poem on on Cyndi’s blog, then Chris’ & Ruben’s concretes (Thank you for the inspiration :D!) Ruben, here it is, finally. You did say, “Just do it”, glad I am able to doo it. I finally pooped out a concrete something O_o!! I wouldn’t be surprised if somewhere out there, there’s a twin of this pooem. I suppository so, I haven’t tried searching for any, but yeah this was fun for me. Ok this is still editable—feel free to share any –sh ending words and I might consider adding it :p it’s just me, but eh, kinda iffy that it doesn’t tie too much—with the bushing it then flushing it. oh well. ** thank you, Cyndi & Chris for the added words :D, I would have missed them otherwise --- I doo think this will get longer & longer! please stay tootooned for more evacuations ;)

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Date: 6/16/2018 4:21:00 PM
Heya! Gotta say although it didn't place, I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED this piece! Thanks for entering it! xomo :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:00:00 PM
Hi, Nikko, you always choose such silly poems of mine to visit when you come here. haha. Anyway, it's a pleasure to see a comment from you since our times are few and far between these days. I am incredibly busy all the time. You too? How is the teaching going? Luv ya, my friend!!
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:00:00 PM
By the way, my latest poems all are rather silly! But I did write a few really nice ones this month.
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Date: 5/27/2017 8:11:00 PM
Hmmmmmm, this must be the one you told me about!! Let me see your other one. hahaha
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kabuteng P.iNk k.
Date: 5/28/2017 6:13:00 PM
yep, this was it, Andrea! That's cool you you saw the shape just before you left, I would be sad (really really sad, haha) if you hadn't, shucks!
Date: 5/25/2017 8:21:00 AM
LOVE the shhhhhhhhh of it. ROLFMAO! You rock! Poop-tastic! Wishit all the best! LOL!!!
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kabuteng P.iNk k.
Date: 5/25/2017 3:12:00 PM
Haha, oh my golly, my head is in the toilet-- when I saw "You rock" of course I thought of the pellet kind of poop! Ohh, "wishit"! That slipped my mind, I think I will add that! Thanks for reading, Cyndi :)!
Date: 5/25/2017 6:21:00 AM
Hey welcome to my world of poop poems lol - really love the humour here and it is far from a poop poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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kabuteng P.iNk k.
Date: 5/25/2017 3:09:00 PM
Hello Jan, hehe believe me, I have long been there, just been in the closet, all my pooems have been in my head (eep or should I say intestines again ;)?). Coming from the Poop Queen herself, I am really glad that you enjoyed this, such an honor, thank you :) --- Ruben suggested a concrete haiku, I would enjoy seeing that as well :) go, go, go :D!