Kabuteng P.Ink K. Poet Concrete

Shhh

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…shh
   bashit
 cashit
  dishit
 dashit
no tp
 bushit
hushit
  gashit
 hashit
lashit
 sashit
wishit
would
come
 now
pushit
 pushit
 some
more
lushit
 don’t
rushit
 you
might
 mashit
mushit
  don't
splashit!
 goshit,
too
late!
 ~ouch,
  fishit
rashit
 tushit
  gushit
washit
flush
  it..





         II




                  °°
          crashit
       blushit
    flashit
  freshit
   can't
 brushit
 can't
finishit
uhh
can't
  crushit
  this
slushit
cherishit
    Ooh
       ooh
          o
            ¤
              °
   
 

III
                                   sh
                               woo.sh
                             's         it 
                               vanishit
                            sheepish  
                                       it!                

** ok this one is still in the works...don't really want to force it





Writer’s babble: This has been in my intestines for a loong time now (years actually) but never figured out how to do it. Then *poopboom*! It all got digested and assimilated—the recent sample poem on on Cyndi’s blog, then Chris’ & Ruben’s concretes (Thank you for the inspiration :D!)

Ruben, here it is, finally. You did say, “Just do it”, glad I am able to doo it. I finally pooped out a concrete something O_o!!

I wouldn’t be surprised if somewhere out there, there’s a twin of this pooem.  I suppository so, I haven’t tried searching for any, but yeah this was fun for me. 
Ok this is still editable—feel free to share any –sh ending words and I might consider adding it :p

it’s just me, but eh, kinda iffy that it doesn’t tie too much—with the bushing it then flushing it. oh well. 

** thank you, Cyndi & Chris for the added words :D, I would have missed them otherwise --- I doo think this will get longer & longer! please stay tootooned for more evacuations ;)

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 16, 2018 at 4:21 PM Heya! Gotta say although it didn't place, I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED this piece! Thanks for entering it! xomo :)

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2018 at 8:00 PM By the way, my latest poems all are rather silly! But I did write a few really nice ones this month.

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2018 at 8:00 PM Hi, Nikko, you always choose such silly poems of mine to visit when you come here. haha. Anyway, it's a pleasure to see a comment from you since our times are few and far between these days. I am incredibly busy all the time. You too? How is the teaching going? Luv ya, my friend!!

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2017 at 8:11 PM Hmmmmmm, this must be the one you told me about!! Let me see your other one. hahaha Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 28, 2017 at 6:13 PM yep, this was it, Andrea! That's cool you you saw the shape just before you left, I would be sad (really really sad, haha) if you hadn't, shucks!

Cyndi Macmillan May 25, 2017 at 8:21 AM LOVE the shhhhhhhhh of it. ROLFMAO! You rock! Poop-tastic! Wishit all the best! LOL!!! Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 25, 2017 at 3:12 PM Haha, oh my golly, my head is in the toilet-- when I saw "You rock" of course I thought of the pellet kind of poop! Ohh, "wishit"! That slipped my mind, I think I will add that! Thanks for reading, Cyndi :)!

Jan Allison May 25, 2017 at 6:21 AM Hey welcome to my world of poop poems lol - really love the humour here and it is far from a poop poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 25, 2017 at 3:09 PM Hello Jan, hehe believe me, I have long been there, just been in the closet, all my pooems have been in my head (eep or should I say intestines again ;)?). Coming from the Poop Queen herself, I am really glad that you enjoyed this, such an honor, thank you :) --- Ruben suggested a concrete haiku, I would enjoy seeing that as well :) go, go, go :D!