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I took her hand at sweet sixteen Kissed her on the cheek The clouds looked down We were about to be drowned No umbrellas to protect our dreams I held her hand As we ran and ran Raindrops kissing our cheeks I gazed up at her delicious peeks I said sorry sweet, do not cry A tear she shed As she bled Her love was cut in two She looked at me, as if to plea Shivering she said, don’t mind me I am wet Wipe away my damp memories

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Date: 4/28/2015 8:50:00 PM
I still dream of mine sometimes. The dreams are never kind. I love this poem! Jill
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:51:00 AM
Not sure if you have read a recent poem by River Green. I am always saddened when what should be beauty and love becomes a nightmare. Hugs
Date: 4/14/2015 9:56:00 AM
discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece....
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Funom, very kind words indeed!
Date: 4/13/2015 8:37:00 AM
Love of the days of youth.. Always brings a bit of joy and remembrance to me. My great love at age 16 did not even know I existed yet I persisted until we eventually dated--3 years later! Determination coupled with love's longings has its advantages.. Great write my friend , solid 7...
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:22:00 AM
Hi Robert, thanks for your kind words , as usual. Yes first love is always special!
Date: 4/1/2015 7:24:00 AM
aww wow. I like it.
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Cas sweety!
Date: 3/29/2015 10:21:00 PM
: ),Sweet ,so sweet!!!
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:41:00 PM
Sweet just like me!!!! (well after all the Easter chocolates I ate, I must be sweet)
Date: 3/29/2015 1:14:00 PM
Wonderfully written rainy day romance, Arthur...this veil of innocence has a lot going on underneath! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:41:00 PM
It sure does!!! :) thanks
Date: 3/29/2015 12:24:00 PM
Sweet...glad to see your new post. All the best.
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Kim xxx
Date: 3/29/2015 11:38:00 AM
Oh my an epic piece from you my friend..... Cheers
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arthur vaso
Date: 4/4/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Tim!!
Date: 3/29/2015 4:10:00 AM
Oh Arthur you have eclipsed my poem with your wonderful romantic write - ah the innocence of youth! Hugs Jan xx 7 faves xx
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan!!!