Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

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She's Wet

I took her hand at sweet sixteen
Kissed her on the cheek
The clouds looked down
We were about to be drowned
No umbrellas to protect our dreams

I held her hand
As we ran and ran
Raindrops kissing our cheeks
I gazed up at her delicious peeks
I said sorry sweet, do not cry

A tear she shed
As she bled
Her love was cut in two
She looked at me, as if to plea
Shivering she said, don’t mind me I am wet

Wipe away my damp memories

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Jill Spagnola April 28, 2015 at 8:50 PM I still dream of mine sometimes. The dreams are never kind. I love this poem! Jill Arthur Vaso April 30, 2015 at 12:51 AM Not sure if you have read a recent poem by River Green. I am always saddened when what should be beauty and love becomes a nightmare. Hugs

Funom Makama April 14, 2015 at 9:56 AM discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece.... Arthur Vaso April 30, 2015 at 12:49 AM Thank you Funom, very kind words indeed!

Robert Lindley April 13, 2015 at 8:37 AM Love of the days of youth.. Always brings a bit of joy and remembrance to me. My great love at age 16 did not even know I existed yet I persisted until we eventually dated--3 years later! Determination coupled with love's longings has its advantages.. Great write my friend , solid 7... Arthur Vaso April 13, 2015 at 10:22 AM Hi Robert, thanks for your kind words , as usual. Yes first love is always special!

Casarah Nance April 1, 2015 at 7:24 AM aww wow. I like it. Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:29 PM Thanks Cas sweety!

Charmaine Chircop March 29, 2015 at 10:21 PM : ),Sweet ,so sweet!!! Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:41 PM Sweet just like me!!!! (well after all the Easter chocolates I ate, I must be sweet)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 29, 2015 at 1:14 PM Wonderfully written rainy day romance, Arthur...this veil of innocence has a lot going on underneath! Hugs, Rhonda Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:41 PM It sure does!!! :) thanks

Kp Nunez March 29, 2015 at 12:24 PM Sweet...glad to see your new post. All the best. Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:40 PM Thank you Kim xxx

Tim Smith March 29, 2015 at 11:38 AM Oh my an epic piece from you my friend..... Cheers Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:40 PM Thanks Tim!!

Jan Allison March 29, 2015 at 4:10 AM Oh Arthur you have eclipsed my poem with your wonderful romantic write - ah the innocence of youth! Hugs Jan xx 7 faves xx Arthur Vaso April 4, 2015 at 2:29 PM Thank you so much Jan!!!