She's Only Seventeen

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Dedicated to my daughter, Selena Rosalie (Rosie)<3

She's only seventeen Eyes of warm blue ice… a sky with clouds of pearl Kindness peeks out, empathy for the whole world Ebony lashes, concealing, revealing, in a graceful fan Flickering glimpses of this strong woman within Youth plumps and smooths dandelion dusted skin, That only glows a golden bronze when the sun's shinin’. Hair, a long and straight arrow down her back Sometimes it's a rich brown, sometimes blue, or black Not interested in pink satin or frilly, white lace But she loves to have shiny jewels to decorate her face Inside this stunning shell, behind all the bling, Lies a mind full of deep thoughts, a heart that's known pain Yet she laughs without boundaries, she will always dance in the rain My heart and soul, my beloved, She's only seventeen.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/13/2025 7:43:00 AM

Dear Crystol, It is funny the first thing that popped into my head when I read the Title was the Beatles song that starts out "She was Just 17". Crystol what a beautiful tribute to your lovely daughter. I love your endearing descriptions of her eyes, lashes, and hair for the artistically paint a loving portrait. Your amazing poetry captures both her youthful beauty and her deep, empathetic spirit. It's so touching and a beautiful celebration of her uniqueness at seventeen. She must love it!! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Crystol Woods
Date: 3/14/2025 4:31:00 AM

Ha! That's a good song! The one in my head is Abba, Dancing Queen(young and sweet only seventeen). Thank you for the kindness of your review! Xo

Tom Woody

Date: 3/12/2025 1:44:00 PM

Beautiful tribute to your daughter Crystol. I hope she reads it and gives you a big bear hug

Crystol Woods
Date: 3/12/2025 2:37:00 PM

Yess and big crocodile tears too lol... she's a sweetheart. Thanks Tom! Xo

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/12/2025 12:38:00 PM

I fell for your gorgeous 'tribute' to your daughter, Crystol! Your descriptions, unique and stunningly beautiful. Soulful ~ faved

Crystol Woods
Date: 3/12/2025 2:36:00 PM

Wow, thank you! She's my baby girl forever lol. Xo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2025 12:20:00 PM

Sounds like a beauty! She has the whole world in front of her. Only 17 once, I hope she enjoys! Hugs

Crystol Woods
Date: 3/12/2025 2:36:00 PM

She is, inside and out! Ty! Xo