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She's Just Nagging Again

mother of two boys
nagged at dad clowning by pool
one dive too many ~
forgive my raised jaded brow
'nag' now aids paraplegic



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2017

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December 20, 2017 at 6:57 AM

Line, a rather dark well written Tanka. An intense way to get your point across.

December 20, 2017 at 10:02 PM

A true story I heard a long time ago that always stuck with me. Thanks for your visit, James.

Richard Lamoureux

December 19, 2017 at 2:37 PM

Whew, I didn't see that coming. A very effective piece.

December 19, 2017 at 2:58 PM

Thanks, Richard.

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