She's Dreaded - Deluxe

She's dreaded
Her presence unpleasant
Thoughts twisted like the locks on her head 
She's deranged
Her brutal essence had victims beheaded 
She's insane, make it stop, put an end to fools like black dots
Hands down, ink deceased, lyrical suicide
on a maximum level that's
Self-inflicted genocide
Her dreaded obsession to oppress with lyrical suppression
The sight of her
Twisted first impressions
Her undying will to hunt, search and find and victims close and hide 
Virtual paraglide, 
They dropped their pens in broad daylight
Fatal moments in public sight
Permanent loss of left and right
Their hands died
Fingers buried by her 23rd line
She's dreaded
Her presence resented

Unpleasant her presence like the essence of menace 
She's dreaded
Unwanted - her lifelessness granted
Spectators enchanted, with pleasure they chanted
Pistol conceiving meets bullet receiving and
BANG BANG!
She's leaving

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/25/2013 6:44:00 AM
I love this bang!
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Tshego Khumalo
Date: 9/25/2013 6:50:00 AM
Thanx dear :-)
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