She's All Bottled Up

She's all bottled up
better rub her down
hope to cheer her up
and remove that frown
she's a hard nut to crack
and may hardly budge
But, I'll give it a whack
and feed her this fudge!



Copyright McCuen 2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 13, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Cute and caring. I don't know many people that can resist some really great fudge. This is a nice little piece with great imagery. Smiles from Lolita
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