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Sheriff's Last Ride

When visions crawl into his dream to grate against a hilltop’s ire, a sheriff flicks like soft campfire where hazy winds dip low ,midstream. Bandit frays stab a roguish past… he gazes at Time…in lone sojourn as plucks of hummed guitar return, to soothe a mind now calm, steadfast. Though old wounds bite the edge of glow a hundred stars bathe eyes quite whole, and moonlight kindles to console the raid of dark through glazed halo. From where he rides, the visions fade in homage to a pure moment… that on warm breath of contentment, morning knights his final crusade. 4/18/2016 For Rob Carmack’s Lyrics Contest Inspiration from lines of the song, ‘God Hates a Coward’—Tomahawk

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Date: 4/25/2016 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations Nette for another wonderful win...
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Date: 4/25/2016 5:03:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win. Linda
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Date: 4/25/2016 12:26:00 PM
A deserving yet well written piece. No wonder why it has gotten to the top placement. Congrats, nette. hugs.
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Date: 4/25/2016 2:59:00 AM
Congrats, Nette, for your WIN with beautifully, rhythmic piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:24:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write nette..
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Date: 4/24/2016 9:16:00 AM
Nette, I can see him dousing the campfire and riding off into the sunset...well done
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Date: 4/24/2016 9:02:00 AM
Great write and win Nette...Congrats
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:37:00 AM
Outstanding poem, Nette, congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/24/2016 12:17:00 AM
Congrats on winning the top lot Nette! it has been written with such ease! Enjoyed you rhyme too!
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Date: 4/23/2016 9:06:00 PM
Your poems never fail me. Congrats with hugs to both you and Snickers.
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Date: 4/20/2016 2:12:00 PM
"Though old wounds bite the edge of glow", great line among many... J.
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Date: 4/19/2016 1:52:00 PM
Doggies! Had to read this one a couple of times. I get a calm acceptance of death - "From where he rides the visions fade," I don't know God hates a coward. I don't know any of the popular songs. I suspect this one is over my head. Love, daver
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Date: 4/18/2016 3:10:00 PM
oh, we both wrote about sherrifs!! Mine was the modern one of Banshee. I love how you made yours romantic, like a cowboy of long ago.
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Date: 4/18/2016 10:47:00 AM
I too, love the imagery, nette..so please to be able to read your poems again..
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Date: 4/18/2016 8:35:00 AM
Interesting work..I am sure it is up there with the winners..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2016 7:52:00 PM
Outstanding creation. 7 from me. I enjoyed............hugs
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Date: 4/17/2016 5:37:00 PM
I could imagine this tender western scene in my heart's eye. Impeccable poem depicting a real marshal!
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Date: 4/17/2016 5:00:00 PM
Dear Nette Very cleverly done my dear love the imagery in this piece, great poetry again my young friend, awesome job, and thanks for your comment on walking sunshine, The wizard of Oz is one of my all time favorites, cheri
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