Shelter Me

Seven plus ten adds up to seventeen;
I learned as a teacher with some success. 
that charming seven-year olds will express
incidental learning from which I glean.

Take for example, the lush color green.
Ask a seven-year-old – what does green mean?
Green is my mom’s eyes and also her dress.
Seven plus ten.

Ten years hence, those same guys are not so keen.
Their appeal is cars and in them they careen.
Hear the weeping willow cry and confess
green is my limbs and for teens quick access -
escape from the cops, where they can’t be seen. 
Seven plus ten.


July 10, 2019

Luloo's contest:  17 is the Lucky Number

I chose the theme, Shelter Me for my rondeau.
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Mcgee Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:53 AM
I love this fun take on the contest words...congrats on your win!
Scars Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 2:52 PM
great job Reason! Loved that theme and where you took it. thank you for your participation and congratulations on your win. :)-luloo
Poteet Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 7:08 PM
Thank you Lu Loo. I enjoyed your prompt(s) and the word bank. Appreciate the placement in your contest.
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