Shelter In Need

so lonely,so sad.yours feelings are hurt, can't trust to love
no more.
have a beautiful smile but hurt inside,trying to make ends 
meets.
thinking life is just like a drama soap opera on tv.
you wanted somebody to shelter you,somebody to hold you
your sad and scared,you hope one day that true love will
ever come towards you.
you wish and wish and wish.
you wish you can fly away where no one wouldn't bother you no more
you hope to be happy but can't be.
but there is somebody who will shelter you,all you gottah do is
trust in them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/6/2010 4:40:00 PM
For some people trust is not easy because of life circumstances and it takes a long time to built their trust..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2010 6:10:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup--hope and trust you will have much inspriation at our poetry haven.
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Date: 4/17/2010 12:15:00 PM
You got that right all you have to do is trust, enjoyed
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:07:00 AM
TRUST that is all we got. Nice one good write. I LIKE THE ENDING P.D.
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