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Sheet Lightning Over the Somme

The thunderous skies now capitulate to man, witnessing their tirade of wrath Who would have thought nature now bowed, whilst viewing man's path What man could imagine, beating a power like she When I look back at the template I wrote This wasn't meant to be Inspired by reading a posting on Facebook by 'Janette Fisher' <*>

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Date: 5/23/2014 1:29:00 PM
Hi James, This was so unique and clever. Tones of the weather, said very well. Expertly detailed here.You are a wonderful expressionist my friend. Thanks for sharing this write with us here. Love and Peace, Deborah
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James Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 1:33:00 PM
Thank you kindly Deborah :)
Date: 5/23/2014 7:42:00 AM
Very descriptive and impressive work..Some thunder and lightning storms are a dramatic sight..Thanks for the visit to my page..Good to see your work again.Sara
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Date: 6/2/2014 1:43:00 PM
Many thanks Sara, James :)
Date: 5/22/2014 5:39:00 AM
Reminds me of the only time I visited France back in 1972. Good write.
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James Fraser
Date: 6/2/2014 1:42:00 PM
Aye, France would be a lovely country to visit, James.
Date: 5/21/2014 10:15:00 AM
James, amazing write... Janette, is quite the inspirational poet... Linda
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James Fraser
Date: 5/21/2014 1:44:00 PM
Thank you kindly P.D. <*> James :)
Date: 5/21/2014 10:01:00 AM
very cool write. I personally love the wrath of nature it will kill us all someday.
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James Fraser
Date: 5/21/2014 1:46:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it Nathan, many thanks <*> James :)

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