James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Sheet Lightning Over the Somme

The thunderous skies now capitulate to man, witnessing their tirade of wrath
Who would have thought nature now bowed, whilst viewing man's path 
What man could imagine, beating a power like she
When I look back at the template I wrote
This wasn't meant to be



Inspired by reading a posting on Facebook by 'Janette Fisher'


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Deborah Shiells May 23, 2014 at 1:29 PM Hi James, This was so unique and clever. Tones of the weather, said very well. Expertly detailed here.You are a wonderful expressionist my friend. Thanks for sharing this write with us here. Love and Peace, Deborah James Fraser May 23, 2014 at 1:33 PM Thank you kindly Deborah :)

Sara Kendrick May 23, 2014 at 7:42 AM Very descriptive and impressive work..Some thunder and lightning storms are a dramatic sight..Thanks for the visit to my page..Good to see your work again.Sara James Fraser June 2, 2014 at 1:43 PM Many thanks Sara, James :)

Robert Pettit May 22, 2014 at 5:39 AM Reminds me of the only time I visited France back in 1972. Good write. James Fraser June 2, 2014 at 1:42 PM Aye, France would be a lovely country to visit, James.

Poet Destroyer A May 21, 2014 at 10:15 AM James, amazing write... Janette, is quite the inspirational poet... Linda James Fraser May 21, 2014 at 1:44 PM Thank you kindly P.D. <*> James :)

Nathan D. May 21, 2014 at 10:01 AM very cool write. I personally love the wrath of nature it will kill us all someday. James Fraser May 21, 2014 at 1:46 PM I'm glad you liked it Nathan, many thanks <*> James :)