Sheer Streaming Curtains

Let sun's light so shine, As radiant curtained beams, Stroll among the trees. Inspired by Raul Moreno
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Love it....RdP
Dyer Avatar
November 29, 2009 at 8:43 PM
Great write!
Chircop Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 10:34 PM
I missed this one..so beautiful the description you gave,your heart is full of light Marty beaming like the streaming curtain..excellent-Charma
Culverhouse Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 3:57 PM
enjoyed reading, good luck in the contest!
Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 6:56 AM
Kool Haiku Marty, best of luck in the contest >> James
Strand Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 12:47 AM
Best wishes with this one Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Sheart Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 5:43 PM
Wonderful Haiku Marty! Great visual too. smile, thanks for sharing. Good luck in contest! Love Light Patty
Sweetheart Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 5:21 PM
Great poem, Marty, and good luck in Raul's contest.. I also have entered and this is great fun... luv how each poet who submitted an entry has differenct visuals of the photo ... amazing.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 18, 2009 at 5:02 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Karen
Guzzi Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 4:17 PM
just lovely and dear. Light & Love
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