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Sheer fine batiste Batiste de soie Ghostly creature outcaste Floats past upstairs window Sad down turned lips frown Gone arriviste Sponsor:Nette Onclaud Contest: Poem Of Compression October 1, 2013 Poet: Sara Kendrick

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/13/2013 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Well done Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/10/2013 8:25:00 PM

Sara, lovely poem... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/9/2013 10:26:00 AM

Wonderful, Sara! Congrats on your well-deserved win! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 10/8/2013 8:20:00 PM

Sara,.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Shanity Rain

Date: 10/6/2013 1:08:00 PM

Awesome write ! Not enough time in my week to read all these amazing poems . Congratulations on a well-deserved Number 1 !! Win !

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/6/2013 12:25:00 PM

Lovely and awesome piece, Sara.Great write. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2013 1:23:00 AM

Congratulations to you, dear!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/5/2013 6:36:00 PM

well written Sara...congrats on your win :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/5/2013 5:35:00 PM

congratulations on your # 1 spot in the contest. Way to go. Love, Joyce

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/5/2013 1:51:00 PM

congrads on this compresion poem. john

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/5/2013 10:22:00 AM

Excellent Sara!! You intrigued us all the way!! Congratulations!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/5/2013 9:13:00 AM

Very nice Sara.Congratulations on your 1st place win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2013 7:42:00 AM

- A first prize winning poem, Sara ... well deserved! - Congratulations! - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 10/2/2013 9:41:00 PM

Wow Sara....what a thing to experience...great write...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2013 5:44:00 PM

Sara, this is deep, and sad to end life this way... Did you really witness such a jump... good luck in the contest... Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2013 5:51:00 AM

- A confused and sad ghost .... well done, Sara. - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/1/2013 5:21:00 PM

Hey, now this is a Halloween story and I just love it my friend! You told it very wonderfully! I truly loved reading this remarkable poem this evening! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2013 7:21:00 AM

I saw a woman jumping to her death from an upstairs landing floating past the church like windows of the vestibule..She had managed to catch her a rich man but could not maintain her position for she knew nothing of how to behave in this new position of wealth...Every night now her ghost floats down from her high and lofty place to the place where her body landed..Sara