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Sheer fine batiste
Batiste de soie
Ghostly creature outcaste
Floats past upstairs window
Sad down turned lips frown
Gone arriviste    

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud
Contest: Poem Of Compression
October 1, 2013
Poet: Sara Kendrick

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Richard Lamoureux

October 13, 2013 at 7:52 AM

Congratulations on your win. Well done Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

October 10, 2013 at 8:25 PM

Sara, lovely poem... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

October 9, 2013 at 10:26 AM

Wonderful, Sara! Congrats on your well-deserved win! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A

October 8, 2013 at 8:20 PM

Sara,.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Shanity Rain

October 6, 2013 at 1:08 PM

Awesome write ! Not enough time in my week to read all these amazing poems . Congratulations on a well-deserved Number 1 !! Win !

Olusegun Arowolo

October 6, 2013 at 12:25 PM

Lovely and awesome piece, Sara.Great write. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

October 6, 2013 at 1:23 AM

Congratulations to you, dear!!

Sandra Adams

October 5, 2013 at 6:36 PM

well written Sara...congrats on your win :)

Joyce Johnson

October 5, 2013 at 5:35 PM

congratulations on your # 1 spot in the contest. Way to go. Love, Joyce

John Loving Iii

October 5, 2013 at 1:51 PM

congrads on this compresion poem. john

Carrie Richards

October 5, 2013 at 10:22 AM

Excellent Sara!! You intrigued us all the way!! Congratulations!

Kash Poet

October 5, 2013 at 9:13 AM

Very nice Sara.Congratulations on your 1st place win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 5, 2013 at 7:42 AM

- A first prize winning poem, Sara ... well deserved! - Congratulations! - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

October 2, 2013 at 9:41 PM

Wow Sara....what a thing to experience...great write...

Poet Destroyer A

October 2, 2013 at 5:44 PM

Sara, this is deep, and sad to end life this way... Did you really witness such a jump... good luck in the contest... Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 2, 2013 at 5:51 AM

- A confused and sad ghost .... well done, Sara. - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

October 1, 2013 at 5:21 PM

Hey, now this is a Halloween story and I just love it my friend! You told it very wonderfully! I truly loved reading this remarkable poem this evening! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

October 1, 2013 at 7:21 AM

I saw a woman jumping to her death from an upstairs landing floating past the church like windows of the vestibule..She had managed to catch her a rich man but could not maintain her position for she knew nothing of how to behave in this new position of wealth...Every night now her ghost floats down from her high and lofty place to the place where her body landed..Sara

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