Sheep With Loyal Guard

sheep
                                             at risk 
                                       in scrubland
                                   attacked by wild
                              dogs while loyal guard
                                  managed to hound
                                   them and reached
                                             target 
                                              deep
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Fowler Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:44 PM
Back with big congratulations on your win Alfonso! :)
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August 21, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. A fun read. Have a great day.............
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August 21, 2023 at 2:26 AM
Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Sara
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August 20, 2023 at 9:58 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem ... a whole story in a small poem ... well done, Alfonso :) -
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Lane Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your winning ninette, Alfonso.
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August 19, 2023 at 5:41 PM
A vivid picture of sheep, predators and the loyal shepherds. Congrats on your win in m y contest, Alfonso! Blessings, Kim M
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August 14, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Thank goodness for the loyal guard! Nice done Alfonso! :)
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