Sheep

Baa Baa Black Sheep Way Up high, hanging suspended In the sky-blue sky

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Brian Strand

Date: 11/9/2009 12:15:00 AM

Nice rhyme Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/8/2009 2:26:00 AM

Yes, Sara, a perfect Haiku !!! And thank you your kind comments..Gert

Milton Toran

Date: 11/7/2009 9:55:00 PM

Possibly a storm cloud? Great haiku with a perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Milt

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2009 8:02:00 PM

Wonderful write Sara and interesting choice of words in your haiku.. the last poem u posted has no title so cannot access to read it .. want to check and see what happened? ... always enjoy your poetry.. thankxxx for sharing and for commenting on poem for the Highlander... well deserved and long over due.. happy Sunday .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/7/2009 5:46:00 PM

Dear Sara, This is a really Great Haiku with a bit of a twist on nursery rhymes too LOVE ALWAYS...HG