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Written for Brian's Choose O Prompt on April 14th 2025
sequestered in a somber sepulchre where I relinquish dead memories and iced nightmares upon resting ivy, twisted with rotting thistle I'm no longer able to breathe pulverized pain as I shed this stitched-on hollow skin resuscitation under Jupiter's moon

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Date: 4/14/2025 12:40:00 PM
This is so beautiful Sara, clear and precise poetry without the flowery! <3
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Date: 4/14/2025 6:08:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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