Shedding

shedding tears over a wasted life ~ a shattered chainlink AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on November 7, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2018 5:17:00 PM

I too really like the shattered chainlink metaphor here.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/12/2018 5:39:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 11/8/2018 4:08:00 PM

The shattered chainlink is such a fitting metaphor for this... I can just picture the "hole" left in the fence due to its absence. Great poem, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2018 4:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Rhona, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/8/2018 5:09:00 AM

this shedding tears is meaningless ! ///nice

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2018 9:52:00 AM

So true, what's most important is identifying opportunities to act and make a difference till it's not too late.