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She'D Lost Her Tomorrow

Each day she sat upon her nest lovingly nurturing her unborn chicks in burning sunshine she gasped for air her dedication beyond compare Yesterday a gale ~ a gust just took her nest blew it away Her eggs ~ Her chicks were now all gone and looking on all I could hear was total panic borne in her cries as slowly tears welled in my eyes This beautiful mother had lost her eggs in the blink of an eye unborn now gone and she’s left wondering Why… Head held low surveying the scene her pitiful cries of what might have been For in her grief beyond belief I witnessed her sorrow she’d lost her tomorrow My tears now flowed at Natures brutality sadly beginning to face reality Sweet black backed gull I pray one day you may be blessed in time ~ For I feel your loss so deeply as if your loss ‘twere mine... Written on 24rd May 2020 at 4.00 am, after witnessing the previous evenings devastation of a 40 mile per hour gale – so sad… Contest Brian's Choice S Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 6/2/2020 6:01:00 AM
A tragic story Ann, things don't always go the way we want them too Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/4/2020 9:44:00 AM
Yes sadly that is so true Tom. Hope you and your family are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/25/2020 10:38:00 AM
Oh my, this really reached me. So well written Ann. So very sad. You have shown us superbly. Take care :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/26/2020 9:40:00 AM
Yes it was awful to see this Heidi it really upset me, after watching her sitting in the heat of the sun for a couple of weeks, she had been so attentive and caring and now she looked puzzled and perplexed wondering how that had happened? Take good care my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/24/2020 10:45:00 PM
Beautiful and so sad! In the USs, they slaughters millions of farm animals. I wanted to cry. Not for food. There is no storage for bodies... Best in contest. The Two of Us )))
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/26/2020 9:37:00 AM
To the Two of You ~ I thank you sweet girls ~ it was such a sad sight to see her looking around and making pitiful sounds of distress and there were only a few days to go before they were due to hatch... nature can be cruel at times. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/24/2020 12:44:00 PM
A sad loss for you and her...poignantly written. Congrats on your first place.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/26/2020 9:28:00 AM
Ohhh bless you Jeanne for your comments and congrats and your kind visit my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/24/2020 12:04:00 PM
Even animals have feelings, nicely done and congratulations on your win. hugs eve
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/26/2020 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for your sweet comments dear Eve I always appreciate your kind visits. I hope you are keeping safe and well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/24/2020 5:12:00 AM
Ann, this poem is a winner - in any contest, and I am glad of your win. "in the blink of an eye unborn now gone and she’s left wondering Why…" - so telling. So heartfelt and sad, around Mother's Day too. Great one, my friend.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/24/2020 5:48:00 AM
Many thanks dear Caren, yes I was devastated to see her nest, with three dark brown eggs in, had been blown away, possibly when she got off it to stretch her legs - have soupmailed you Caren. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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