Shed

Acorn stretches years
Dark hail storm’s thunderhead leers….
Brown leaves fell like tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 12:03 PM
I think your success is now assuring you that some of us enjoy rhyme in haiku and senryu forms, Robb. Congratulations on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Good luck in the contest with this good one..Reads like a winner to me..I was so encouraged by your review of my work..Your visit made my afternoon..Sara
La France Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 8:44 AM
very pretty, I love it.
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