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She Wore Brocade

She wore brocade of red with silver threads A tight fit, clinging to her shapely hips A matching shade of lipstick on her lips The lady was determined to turn heads And turn around they did, news quickly spreads On the cruise ship she both stunned and bewitched She wore brocade. The dress was split both sides to top of legs Suddenly back of the dress came unzipped She tried to hide from the cheers and the quips Till the captain sent all off to their beds She wore brocade. *+* 13th October 2022 Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jeff Keyser Written in Rondine form poetry.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/27/2022 8:48:00 AM

LOL. Showy woman, brocade and "all". Great write Belle :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/21/2022 9:27:00 PM

That must have been quite a show! I like the details of the silver threads and matching lipstick, this was a fun one, hope it's a winner for you~

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2022 1:21:00 AM

Thank you kindly Michelle, it was fun to write a poem in the Rondine form, trying new styles of poetry puts one’s muse to the test… Belle

Michael Tor

Date: 10/21/2022 6:41:00 PM

Lovely Poetry Belle so enjoyed reading. Thank you much for sharing...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/21/2022 6:43:00 PM

Thank you Michael, pleased you enjoyed the read… Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/13/2022 6:55:00 PM

She wore brocade --- caused to spill my Gatorade! ~ Well, at least it rhymes...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2022 8:05:00 PM

It does and also rhymes with… She wore brocade till she got decade…

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/13/2022 3:20:00 PM

Belle, I enjoy the lighter tone you provided in your very cleverly constructed Rondine. I'm sure the disaster was something to be envied. I'm not sure how many folks on the boat tour yelled at her as she strutted around the ship.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2022 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, when she strutted around the ship many folk did explode, not for the brocade she wore but what they saw when her dress hit the floor… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2022 1:24:00 PM

Wonder how many whistled at her as she paraded the cruise ship. The disaster was to be envied I'm sure.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2022 2:54:00 PM

It certainly was Victor and as for the whistles they came by the score. Thank you… Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/13/2022 11:21:00 AM

Xi Jinping's invasion of Taiwan? Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/13/2022 2:53:00 PM

Perhaps- Maloha!