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She Went Home and Chilled

Jane's moods were troubling; they drove her insane They shifted hourly, in sunshine or rain Her doc gave her a pill He said go home and chill ~ Climbed in the freezer, got ice on the brain

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 6/25/2020 11:47:00 PM

Once out of the freezer I hope she doesn't go into mental meltdown, he he he . . . ; )

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2020 1:25:00 PM

You never know. They might have served her frozen. She tastes better that way! lol. Thanks, I.S! ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/20/2020 8:24:00 PM

I smiled as I pictured her climbing into the freezer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2020 11:40:00 PM

I forgot to post a warning: DO NOT try this at home! lol. Cheers, Gershon

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/18/2020 2:39:00 AM

Woha....frozen brain. Need not have put it in the freezer. Best. Mohan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2020 11:31:00 AM

Next time I'll bake it that brain in the oven! ~ Heat Wave

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/18/2020 1:53:00 AM

lol... Frozen brain..Funny write Gershon..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2020 11:30:00 AM

'frozen brain' is served with a side of disabled memories. lol. Thanks, Jenish.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/17/2020 10:52:00 PM

At least she got over the mood problem. :0 Nice one, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2020 11:29:00 AM

There is that! Thanks for the fun comment, Evelyn. ~ Moody Max