She Went Home and Chilled

Jane's moods were troubling; they drove her insane
They shifted hourly, in sunshine or rain
     Her doc gave her a pill
     He said go home and chill
~ Climbed in the freezer, got ice on the brain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Shaw Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 11:47 PM
Once out of the freezer I hope she doesn't go into mental meltdown, he he he . . . ; )
Wolf Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 1:25 PM
You never know. They might have served her frozen. She tastes better that way! lol. Thanks, I.S! ~ gw
Krutsinger Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 8:24 PM
I smiled as I pictured her climbing into the freezer.
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 11:40 PM
I forgot to post a warning: DO NOT try this at home! lol. Cheers, Gershon
Chutani Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 2:39 AM
Woha....frozen brain. Need not have put it in the freezer. Best. Mohan
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 11:31 AM
Next time I'll bake it that brain in the oven! ~ Heat Wave
Somadas Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 1:53 AM
lol... Frozen brain..Funny write Gershon..
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 11:30 AM
'frozen brain' is served with a side of disabled memories. lol. Thanks, Jenish.
Buehler Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 10:52 PM
At least she got over the mood problem. :0 Nice one, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 11:29 AM
There is that! Thanks for the fun comment, Evelyn. ~ Moody Max
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