She Waves Her Wings

Fluttering and flattering for all who see, 
her brilliance gleams in my cherry blossom tree-
                 Clouds do part when she  w a v e s  her wings, 
and stunning luster to the sky she brings.

Deep azure with a dark chameleon hue,
      periwinkle wings  s t r e a m i n g  hints of baby blue-
flipping and flapping ~divine inspiration~
      the butterfly...a lovely God-given creation. 

                  She sings in tune with melodious sprinkles, 
and all her stardust  s p r e a d s  and twinkles-
                  Medallion sunshine follows where she leads
as she disperses in my garden daisy seeds. 

Plants flourish from her  s c a t t e r i n g  nectar juice, 
      an elixir feeding mother nature; the perfect use- 
She liberates herself with fortitude from her cocoon
      in the heat of Summertime, the end of June.

                  For she is eternally luminous (glistening),
and I can hear her echo when I'm listening-
                  Clouds do part when she  w a v e s  her wings...
and stunning luster to the sky she brings.




October 2, 2019
Writing Challenge, October -Butterfly- 
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/8/2019 7:22:00 PM
Lu congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem!
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Date: 10/9/2019 7:38:00 AM
thank you dear lady, i am honored...:)-luloo
Date: 10/6/2019 4:13:00 PM
Beautifully expressed luloo, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/9/2019 7:37:00 AM
thank you lovely lady ;)-luloo
Date: 10/6/2019 12:46:00 PM
congratulations my friend on your top win....beautiful as always :) hugs
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Date: 10/9/2019 7:37:00 AM
thank you sweet Sandy for being you...;)-luloo
Date: 10/6/2019 11:35:00 AM
- Beautifully described, L.L. ... congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2019 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the wonderful poem!!
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Date: 10/9/2019 7:36:00 AM
many thanks lovely Heather :)-luloo
Date: 10/4/2019 1:58:00 AM
I think you just nabbed the number one spot in this contest.
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Date: 10/9/2019 7:35:00 AM
thank you caring Caren. :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2019 9:30:00 AM
Fantabulous write my friend...sure to place high...all the best Lu loo...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/2/2019 10:01:00 AM
thank you so much sweet WW :) kindness prevails in you :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2019 9:24:00 AM
An enchanting piece of poetry that flutters so beautifully before these eyes. Really nice crafted Luloo. This was amazing. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 10/2/2019 10:00:00 AM
thank you dear Chris, that was nice. I didn't expect so many nice comments so quick. My day is made happier :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2019 8:56:00 AM
Between you and Line I am stuck in the mud, beautiful
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Date: 10/2/2019 10:00:00 AM
thank you dear Bobby, that was sweet :)-luloo
Date: 10/2/2019 8:51:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful... I LOVE It... You've expressed the beauty of the butterfly so wonderfully. It's definitely a winner. And this is for sure a fave. Bless you always, sweet friend
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Date: 10/2/2019 9:59:00 AM
aww thank you dear lady, you are always so kind...:)-luloo
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