She Was Worthy and Confident

She had an atrocious way about her 
Even when things went awry,
She kept her anguish to herself

If I had the power to assuage my own feelings of worthlessness
To absolve myself of any perceived wrongdoings
I might enjoy her magical allure

Oh, wait, she has deemed me an auspicious opponent?
I have a tiny appetency to center my wagons and take her on.
If she was not so unpredictably worthy and self-confident
it would be an easier decision.

She comes toward me with her all-knowing power.
I shriek and run off in fright.


Written October 31, 2019
Contest: Crazy A’s Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/3/2019 8:02:00 PM
nicely penned Caren....congratulations on your win :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/4/2019 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 11/3/2019 7:03:00 PM
My county friend yes a great win my dear! Love it congratulations!;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/4/2019 6:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Brenda.
Date: 11/3/2019 6:46:00 PM
So good Caren some great lines, thanks so much for your entry, congrats on a fine placement!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/4/2019 6:52:00 AM
Thank you John for having the contest. It was a terrific idea, and made me look up some words.
Date: 10/31/2019 9:54:00 PM
lol! so cool, you are definitely one of the best writers/poets here and one of my favourites....the entire poem so good, but this line in particular ...."I have a tiny appetency to center my wagons and take her on..."
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/1/2019 7:38:00 AM
I am stupendously honored my friend. I cannot tell you how wonderful this comment feels to us (because there is of course more than one in here) today.
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