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She Was Worthy and Confident

She had an atrocious way about her Even when things went awry, She kept her anguish to herself If I had the power to assuage my own feelings of worthlessness To absolve myself of any perceived wrongdoings I might enjoy her magical allure Oh, wait, she has deemed me an auspicious opponent? I have a tiny appetency to center my wagons and take her on. If she was not so unpredictably worthy and self-confident it would be an easier decision. She comes toward me with her all-knowing power. I shriek and run off in fright. Written October 31, 2019 Contest: Crazy A’s Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Sandra Adams

Date: 11/3/2019 8:02:00 PM

nicely penned Caren....congratulations on your win :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/4/2019 6:51:00 AM

Thank you Sandra.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/3/2019 7:03:00 PM

My county friend yes a great win my dear! Love it congratulations!;)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/4/2019 6:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Brenda.

John Hamilton

Date: 11/3/2019 6:46:00 PM

So good Caren some great lines, thanks so much for your entry, congrats on a fine placement!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/4/2019 6:52:00 AM

Thank you John for having the contest. It was a terrific idea, and made me look up some words.

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 10/31/2019 9:54:00 PM

lol! so cool, you are definitely one of the best writers/poets here and one of my favourites....the entire poem so good, but this line in particular ...."I have a tiny appetency to center my wagons and take her on..."

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/1/2019 7:38:00 AM

I am stupendously honored my friend. I cannot tell you how wonderful this comment feels to us (because there is of course more than one in here) today.