She Was Worthy and Confident

She had an atrocious way about her 
Even when things went awry,
She kept her anguish to herself

If I had the power to assuage my own feelings of worthlessness
To absolve myself of any perceived wrongdoings
I might enjoy her magical allure

Oh, wait, she has deemed me an auspicious opponent?
I have a tiny appetency to center my wagons and take her on.
If she was not so unpredictably worthy and self-confident
it would be an easier decision.

She comes toward me with her all-knowing power.
I shriek and run off in fright.


Written October 31, 2019
Contest: Crazy A’s Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Adams Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 8:02 PM
nicely penned Caren....congratulations on your win :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 6:51 AM
Thank you Sandra.
Chiri Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 7:03 PM
My county friend yes a great win my dear! Love it congratulations!;)
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November 4, 2019 at 6:51 AM
Thank you so much Brenda.
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 6:46 PM
So good Caren some great lines, thanks so much for your entry, congrats on a fine placement!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Thank you John for having the contest. It was a terrific idea, and made me look up some words.
Labyrinth Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 9:54 PM
lol! so cool, you are definitely one of the best writers/poets here and one of my favourites....the entire poem so good, but this line in particular ...."I have a tiny appetency to center my wagons and take her on..."
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November 1, 2019 at 7:38 AM
I am stupendously honored my friend. I cannot tell you how wonderful this comment feels to us (because there is of course more than one in here) today.
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