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She Was Very Strange, and Beautiful

She Was Very Strange, and Beautiful by Michael R. Burch She was very strange, and beautiful, like a violet mist enshrouding hills before night falls when the hoot owl calls and the cricket trills and the envapored moon hangs low and full. She was very strange, in a pleasant way, as the hummingbird flies madly still, so I drank my fill of her every word. What she knew of love, she demurred to say. She was meant to leave, as the wind must blow, as the sun must set, as the rain must fall. Though she gave her all, I had nothing left . . . yet I smiled, bereft, in her receding glow.

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Date: 11/15/2019 7:45:00 AM
I think I dated her once. Nice job. Really enjoyed it.
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Michael Burch
Date: 11/15/2019 1:40:00 PM
I have had a few enigmas in my life, over the years, and now I'm married to one! In fact, the first poem I wrote for her was titled "Enigma." I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

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