She Was Saved

You read in the papers you watch on the news Coalition soldiers amidst as the killing accrues In these theatres of war we lose many lives In these wars of man only death thrives But every so often there's a turn for the good A life is saved they couldn't do what they could The lives of a family murdered by cowards Shot in cold blood bullets they showered But from this tragedy a life was saved It's of a little girl and a soldier who braved A Chief Master Sergeant in the USAF Allows mans humanity to kindly show face This little girl who was saved was shot in the head He stayed by her side for she should have been dead To see pictures like this in the theatres of war Maybe it's understandable to see what we fight for An alleged soldier in wanton family wipe What takes a soldier to become their type My heart goes out to this little girl And all the other children caught up in this war ridden world Written on the spur of the moment after receiving a picture from Sara Kendrick http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/28/2009 6:59:00 AM
WOW.. CHILLS DOWN MY BACK AND TEARS DOWN MY CHEEK!
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Date: 10/26/2009 7:18:00 AM
This was beyond excellent...keep up the good work...Angelita
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Date: 10/24/2009 7:43:00 PM
I cannot believe in a short time u have so captured this gift called poetry with a stirring rendition of She Was Saved... Soup Mail ....Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:54:00 AM
You are so tallented James. Excellent! Pam
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Date: 10/21/2009 3:06:00 PM
This is so moving! I visited your web site to follow up and must congratulate you! I am truly impressed! Very Good job, James. God bless. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/19/2009 5:56:00 PM
This touching piece is the reality of war and a reminder that casualties aren't just staistics but someones loved ones, children, human beings. Beautifully written poetry, James, that goes straight to the heart and my favs! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/19/2009 4:56:00 AM
Powerful write indeed. and a all true statment in these times. really great poem asto me some of the best writting comes from on the spot writting once again great job
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Date: 10/19/2009 4:40:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, I am so glad that my son is no longer in the Army, Although my brother and two cousins are still there. Well done James. Kate. x
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Date: 10/19/2009 3:33:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart through your pen this morning James. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:26:00 PM
It sounds on the spur of the moment James. It sounds as if something possessed your pen and you couldnt put it down until it was finished with your hand, nice job.
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Date: 10/18/2009 7:37:00 AM
Even in the "theaters of war," there are moments such as you describe that define man's compassion. How wonderful this child was saved, but forever she will have to live as the sole survivor of her family. The story unfolds so well in your words, James, and provides inspiration and hope for readers. Excellent write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/18/2009 7:19:00 AM
YOUR VERSES SPEAKS LOUD...excellent work--Charma:)
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Date: 10/18/2009 6:46:00 AM
great story! James
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:36:00 AM
James this poem says it all - our sons coming home for Christmas then he'll be shipped out to serve his second tour of duty - Wonderful heartfelt poetry - God Bless, mj
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Date: 10/18/2009 4:59:00 AM
James, Such a heartfelt poem that captures the true realization of what is happening in our world today. To be able to just write like that in the spur of the moment - an absolute true gift - thank you so very much for sharing your gift with all of us , we are truly blessed. Kelly
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Date: 10/18/2009 4:16:00 AM
James, You have captured the misery of war in this poem. It is so tragic and so unnecessary. If only mankind could forgive and lay down weapons simultaneously, or refuse to fight, we could have world peace. I guess that's another fairytale, one that some children will never hear. Great write here... Lovingly Dane
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Date: 10/18/2009 3:25:00 AM
Great presentation here. I am glad that the picture inspired you. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/17/2009 11:56:00 PM
Wonderful tribute, James! Thanks for sharing your work with us, and thanks SO much for your constant support! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/17/2009 6:00:00 PM
Wonderfully written, James. Thank goodness the little girl was saved. Hail to the Chief Master Sergeant In the USAF. Keep writing your great poetry. I really enjoy it. Kim
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