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She Was My Dancing Partner

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I stood to dance a drunken dance, So I swayed toward her line, With nonchalance and poise and grace, I didn’t spill my wine. And she stood still, didn’t move at all, I had her in a trance, As, with one free hand I held her waist, And slowly tried to dance, Yet she refused to move, budge or play, She didn’t seem to care, That’s when I knew I had to sit, Because she was my chair.

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Date: 10/29/2017 8:58:00 PM
Giggles! Such a great, creative and humorous write Lewis. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 10/29/2017 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Susan, glad u enjoyed it

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