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She Was In Shock

she heard the ambulance coming the sound was surreal she was in shock still trying to figure out what had happened body in the car was hanging back in its seat mouth wide open she did not know her teeth were this ugly close your mouth! she instructed her corpse

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Date: 11/20/2022 9:07:00 PM
Quite a bit of presence left. Perhaps the EMTs will get to her in time.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/22/2022 9:08:00 PM
Nah. She is deceased.
Date: 11/20/2022 8:14:00 PM
Hopefully an NDE and she’ll be back
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/22/2022 9:09:00 PM
I doubt it

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