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Pencil Portrait Painting by Mike Theuer

She was buried in Spring . . . when green buds were bursting forth, and the wind was a gentle whisper and the squirrels and chipmunks played. Now, the snow has fallen soft and pure, and he recalls her face so fair, her hands folded- now beneath the snow on snow. She rests where once red roses lay, peacefully. Long gone are the weeping mourners dressed in black. It is he who comes, to linger with the dead and gaze at her name with tearful eyes. He brings the flowers that she loved, oh, she must be an angel up above. So sweet and calm, so full of life she was a girl of delight. So, quietly her eyelids had closed with a sigh . . . He stands with a heart throbbing, his pain and torture a thirst growing, oh, backward, turn back the pages of her life. He smiles at a beautiful memory, of them hand in hand walking in the snow. She makes a snowball, and throws it straight for his head, but he ducks away . . . laughing. She was buried in Spring . . . when green buds were bursting forth, and the wind was a gentle whisper, and the squirrels and chipmunks played. She was just a girl he vowed to love forever, his wife, his friend, the mother of their child. The child lived . . . but the mother did not see dawn, a life for a life. It seems so unfair to separate those two, she had wanted that baby so very much. She was buried in the Spring . . . when green buds were bursting forth, and the wind was a gentle whisper, and the squirrels and chipmunks played. She exists in an undreaming realm, oh, can she see her baby girl . . . He stands frozen in the snow on snow he knows he should lay down the flowers on her grave but he is like a statue of stone . . . ________________________ September 18, 2017 Written for the contest, Poems That Paint A Picture 2 sponsor, Silent One Free Verse/She Was Buried In Spring Copyright Protected, ID 940700 Inspiration: Pencil Portrait Painting by Mike Theuer Second Place

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Date: 9/21/2017 10:14:00 PM
Broken Wings (Constance), congratulations on your strong placement in this contest! This is a moving contrast between the beauty of a new life and the sorrow of a loving (and loved) one lost. Bartholomew
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Date: 9/21/2017 3:02:00 PM
Hi Constance, you touched my heart with this sad piece. Congratulations on your win, my friend! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:54:00 PM
So moving and heart-felt, Constance. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:19:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your fine win with this beautifully written sad poem.
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Date: 9/20/2017 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win BW, so well written as usual. :))
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Date: 9/20/2017 3:13:00 PM
Beautifully done Constance. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/20/2017 2:54:00 PM
congratulations Broken Wings. you really capture a complete story!
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Date: 9/20/2017 2:45:00 PM
what a gem, constance... congrats and SOUP MAIL!..huggs
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Broken Wings :)
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:58:00 AM
So lovely, Constance! Congrats!
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:38:00 AM
Congrats BW!
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:07:00 AM
A sad write, full of sad and deep lines.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement. A nice flowing poem.p8,
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Date: 9/19/2017 7:52:00 PM
Constance, you are at your best with these kinds of themes and you did an EXCELLENT job with this graveside theme. How is it going for you this week?
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Date: 9/18/2017 2:05:00 PM
Goosebumply good pen :) xomo!
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