Notes About The Poem

 

Pencil Portrait Painting by Mike Theuer

She Was Buried In Spring

She was buried in Spring . . . 
when green buds were bursting forth,
and the wind was a gentle whisper
and the squirrels and chipmunks played.

Now, the snow has fallen soft and pure,
and he recalls her face so fair,
her hands folded-  now beneath the snow on snow.

She rests where once red roses lay,
peacefully.
Long gone are the weeping mourners dressed in black.
It is he who comes,
to linger with the dead
and gaze at her name with tearful eyes.
He brings the flowers that she loved,
oh, she must be an angel up above.

So sweet and calm,
so full of life
she was a girl of delight.

So, quietly her eyelids had closed with a sigh . . .

He stands with a heart throbbing,
his pain and torture a thirst growing,
oh, backward, turn back the pages of her life.

He smiles at a beautiful memory,
of them hand in hand walking in the snow.
She makes a snowball,
and throws it straight for his head,
but he ducks away . . .
laughing.

She was buried in Spring . . .
when green buds were bursting forth,
and the wind was a gentle whisper,
and the squirrels and chipmunks played.

She was just a girl he vowed to love forever,
his wife, his friend, the mother of their child.

The child lived . . .
but the mother did not see dawn,
a life for a life.
It seems so unfair to separate those two,
she had wanted that baby so very much.

She was buried in the Spring . . . 
when green buds were bursting forth,
and the wind was a gentle whisper,
and the squirrels and chipmunks played.

She exists in an undreaming realm,
oh, can she see her baby girl . . .
He stands frozen in the snow on snow
he knows he should lay down the flowers on her grave
but he is like a statue of stone . . .

________________________
September 18, 2017


Written for the contest, Poems That Paint A Picture 2
sponsor, Silent One

Free Verse/She Was Buried In Spring
Copyright Protected, ID 940700

Inspiration:  Pencil Portrait Painting by Mike Theuer

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Williams Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Broken Wings (Constance), congratulations on your strong placement in this contest! This is a moving contrast between the beauty of a new life and the sorrow of a loving (and loved) one lost. Bartholomew
Sietesantos Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Hi Constance, you touched my heart with this sad piece. Congratulations on your win, my friend! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
Canerdy Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:54 PM
So moving and heart-felt, Constance. Congrats on your win! Janice
Ashley Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your fine win with this beautifully written sad poem.
Pett Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win BW, so well written as usual. :))
Murray Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Beautifully done Constance. Congratulations.
Webster Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 2:54 PM
congratulations Broken Wings. you really capture a complete story!
Onclaud Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 2:45 PM
what a gem, constance... congrats and SOUP MAIL!..huggs
Sands Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations for your win Broken Wings :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:58 AM
So lovely, Constance! Congrats!
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:38 AM
Congrats BW!
One Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:07 AM
A sad write, full of sad and deep lines.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations on your placement. A nice flowing poem.p8,
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:52 PM
Constance, you are at your best with these kinds of themes and you did an EXCELLENT job with this graveside theme. How is it going for you this week?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Goosebumply good pen :) xomo!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace