She Walks Among the Shadows

She walks among the shadows of my house
Barely even there – quiet as a mouse
She has never said a word
At least none that I heard
She’s the image of my dear departed spouse

She’s here because her spirit just can’t leave
She’s here because no one has yet to grieve
She looks me in the eye
As if to ask me why
I often chuckle – she’s so damned naïve

It’s not that she was really all that bad
It’s just that one night tryst that she had
I couldn’t stand her sight
So later that same night
I accosted her with my own pentad

She knows I hit her with a hammer – hard
She knows she’s buried right in our backyard
Yet she comes into my home
And she won’t let me alone
She’d like to hoist me on my own petard

Ok – so maybe I’m a real louse
For knocking off my dear departed spouse
But that don’t give her the right
To haunt me day and night
As she walks among the shadows of my house

Pentad – five elements of investigation – in this case – who, what, why, where, how
Petard - The word remains in modern usage in the phrase hoist with one's own 
petard, which means "to be harmed by one's own plan to harm someone else" 
or "to fall into one's own trap," literally implying that one could be lifted up (hoist, or 
blown upward) by one's own bomb.

Written	6/18/11 - 10:02 PM
Honorable Mention in Ghosts contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dailey Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Oh yea - I forgot to add that none of this really happened. My lovely wife and I will be celebrating our 40th anniversary come this December 27th. And now that I have written this poem, any disappearance of my wife will be under suspicion so I guess I am stuck with her forever. Mike
Roberts Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 1:10 PM
great humour in this one, congrats on your HM It is humour right? you didn't really killer her, right????)
Dailey Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Right - I claim both poetic license and the 5th on that!
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Mike : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem.
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's & Jack's "Ghosts" contest Mike. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 9:48 PM
I REALLY LIKE This one. finding some good ones down here in HMs! Did you see Constance's? I love how this one was completely original and had dark humor, which is one thing I dig in movies! Congrats on that Hm. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 8:12 PM
Congrats Mike on your HM in the Ghosts contest with this superior write luv..knew when read the other night it was winning material ..enjoy special honor ...
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:15 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn, mike
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 4:28 PM
Very nice and thanks for the explantation. Congratulations. Joyce
Dailey Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:16 PM
I had to look up those words to make sure they meant what I thought they did. Writing poems really helps improve ones vocabulary. Mike
Devonshire Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:32 PM
Great poem, Mike. Congratulations on your win in the Ghosts contest! Jack and I judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
Dailey Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:14 PM
i do feel proud to be listed among the few. thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Mike
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 8:43 AM
What a take on the theme of Ghosts and thanks for the notes to get through the thoughts, mike
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 8:40 PM
super interesting write Mike and the footnotes are awesome luv.. a great entry for the ghost contest or shadows contest or both luv.. good luck luv..
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