She Waits : Triolet Contest

Black and sleek she waits,
to pounce on unsuspecting foe
Whiskers a tingle she anticipates,
Black and sleek, she waits
come little mouse she states
I wont eat or hurt you,  you know,
Black and sleek she, waits
to pounce, on unsuspecting,  foe


Penned 9 August 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:48 PM
Seren, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:17 PM
Very descriptive of that waiting cat...Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
Morgan Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 4:16 AM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Thank you Morgan ...Seren
A  Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Seren, congratulations.... SKAT
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Hi SKAT.... thanks for the comment ...Seren
Muzzey Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations Seren on your win with this wonderful write. I wish mine would do some pounching, I think they just play with the furry things. I enjoyed the read~Caryl
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:41 AM
LOL I dont own a cat just an old boxer bitch .....Seren
Johnson Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 6:43 PM
And they seem so sweet. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Thank you Joyce ...Seren
Richards Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 1:54 PM
Oh.......naughty cat !!! Sounds like Sylvester to me !! :) Congratulations Seren.......such a cute poem!! (ps...hoping to hear you read next time on Drake's show !) :)
May Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 12:39 PM
congrats on a fine win Seren
Guzzi Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Looking at yours again. I like it better than mine. I am thinking of doing a different triolet now!! haha
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 5:39 PM
She sounds like my Razmatazz, Seren, only my sweetie cat does not care about mice. Very enjoyable triolet.
Sivey Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 5:41 AM
I tought I taw a puddy tat! I did, I did, I did see a puddy tat! And this cat was ready to pounce of that poor defenseless mouse! But in my mind, all the power to the cat, get that mouse! Where we live these outside cats love the field mice that we have, they leave little gifts of them on our doorstep every now and then! This is a spectacular write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a glorious piece, just like a cat too, clever! Great Work!!
O'Leary Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 1:44 AM
Very nice, Seren... good luck in the contest... Terry
Roberts Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 1:45 AM
Thx Terry.......Seren
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