Chris Green Poet Rhyme

She Tore It Up

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She tore it up
for the whole world to see
Two separate pieces
right in front of me

Her face showed her hate
her actions the same
I’m sure she will say
someone else is to blame

I stood there and stared
in pure disbelief
The state of our union
no sign of relief

And hard as I tried
they still are apart
I can’t understand
why she tore up my heart


My heart, what did you think I was talking about?  : )

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Jean Bush February 11, 2020 at 2:19 PM Well rhymed. Chris Green February 11, 2020 at 4:01 PM Thank you. :)

Pashang Salehi February 7, 2020 at 1:50 AM You have done a magnificent job... but I would have done the same thing. Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 7:56 AM Thanks so very much for reading and commenting.

Gershon Wolf February 6, 2020 at 7:06 PM Don't worry, Chris. Darling Nancy "will pray for you now" --- after she gets through praying for the POTUS.... Nice portrayal of a @#$%$#$%^, I mean, one of my favorite politicians. Thanks, Gershon Gershon Wolf February 10, 2020 at 3:37 PM I sprayed my hand with orange hair growth serum, so Nancy's hair could match her hideous personality and outfits. Ha, ha. I am the wickedly good witch! DJGW Chris Green February 7, 2020 at 7:54 AM Thanks my friend. I am happy you found the humor in my poem. I didn't mean to step on one of your @#!**&%$@%$ "faves" but I just couldn't help it. : ) Here, let me shake your hand...nevermind. : )

Ronald D Thompson February 6, 2020 at 4:46 PM Brilliant!! Say no more. Best wishes Chris, loved this!! Ron :) Chris Green February 6, 2020 at 4:49 PM Thanks Ron. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2020 at 8:33 AM - I can't believe she would do something like that ... maybe we don't want to understand either ... she's evil, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green February 6, 2020 at 8:58 AM Thank you my friend. But this was kind of having fun with some of the headlines here in the U.S. I appreciate your kindness though, always Anne-Lise. You are a good friend.

Heidi Sands February 5, 2020 at 6:01 PM First of all, it was disgrace what she did! Secondly , why people are blind to all the MANY accomplishments he has made that are good for our country is beyond me!! Well done Chris :) Chris Green February 6, 2020 at 7:30 AM Thanks so much Heidi. It is sad, that's for sure.

Daniel Turner February 5, 2020 at 4:47 PM Love the humor . You know, when you sit on the fence you can see both sides. From where I'm sitting the grass looks the same. The livestock is different but the grass is the same. Chris Green February 5, 2020 at 4:56 PM That's funny, I like that. Thanks my friend. I know this isn't my best work but I just couldn't pass up the headline.

Carolyn Devonshire February 5, 2020 at 1:57 PM LOL I thought perhaps she had torn up their wedding certificate. Great surprise ending. Really enjoyed the humor at the end, Chris. Hugs, Carolyn Chris Green February 5, 2020 at 1:59 PM Thanks Carolyn, just having a little fun with the headlines.

P.S. Awtry February 5, 2020 at 1:38 PM Well, if it's any consolation, I think you are too good for her ;) Carolyn Devonshire February 5, 2020 at 1:57 PM I agree Chris Green February 5, 2020 at 1:53 PM Thanks, I feel much better now. : ) I appreciate your visit P.S.

Hannah Borke February 5, 2020 at 1:31 PM After reading your poem not knowing what you were talking about, I looked up “tore news”. Shocking. Nancy lost and is reacting like a child. But it’s understandable after months of her toil went up in smoke. Is there a riddle to your poem? I’ll guess: Did your wife once stand in front of you and rip the marriage contract? Chris Green February 5, 2020 at 1:36 PM No, nothing like that...just having a little fun with the current news. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sandra Adams February 5, 2020 at 1:18 PM She is a disgrace for most of her actions. And it’s a shame she can’t be fired but one day soon the last laugh will be on us ... so many wonderful things I have not only heard his words but am living proof of the changes :). Love the poem. Great metaphor Chris Green February 5, 2020 at 1:35 PM Thanks so much Sandy. I am happy you liked my attempt at humor.

Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2020 at 12:47 PM In a different job, she’d be fired for her lack of civil behavior. What a horrible example to our country and of our country. White apparel isn’t always for the good guys. Chris Green February 5, 2020 at 1:35 PM Thanks so much Kim. : ) I think you are right.

Lin Lane February 5, 2020 at 12:16 PM Not so subtle this time, Chris (lol), and because you'll take this as it was meant to match your meaning... He turned away from me from the very start... contempt plastered all over his smug face... but I didn't allow his words to break my heart... I tore them up thinking they were a disgrace Lin Lane February 5, 2020 at 12:21 PM Gonna go there, huh? lol ok and you're welcome. Chris Green February 5, 2020 at 12:19 PM Why whatever do you mean? :) Thanks Lin.