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She Tore It Up

` She tore it up for the whole world to see Two separate pieces right in front of me Her face showed her hate her actions the same I’m sure she will say someone else is to blame I stood there and stared in pure disbelief The state of our union no sign of relief And hard as I tried they still are apart I can’t understand why she tore up my heart My heart, what did you think I was talking about? : )

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Jean Bush

Date: 2/11/2020 2:19:00 PM

Well rhymed.

Chris Green
Date: 2/11/2020 4:01:00 PM

Thank you. :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/7/2020 1:50:00 AM

You have done a magnificent job... but I would have done the same thing.

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 7:56:00 AM

Thanks so very much for reading and commenting.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/6/2020 7:06:00 PM

Don't worry, Chris. Darling Nancy "will pray for you now" --- after she gets through praying for the POTUS.... Nice portrayal of a @#$%$#$%^, I mean, one of my favorite politicians. Thanks, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2020 3:37:00 PM

I sprayed my hand with orange hair growth serum, so Nancy's hair could match her hideous personality and outfits. Ha, ha. I am the wickedly good witch! DJGW

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thanks my friend. I am happy you found the humor in my poem. I didn't mean to step on one of your @#!**&%$@%$ "faves" but I just couldn't help it. : ) Here, let me shake your hand...nevermind. : )

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 2/6/2020 4:46:00 PM

Brilliant!! Say no more. Best wishes Chris, loved this!! Ron :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 4:49:00 PM

Thanks Ron. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2020 8:33:00 AM

- I can't believe she would do something like that ... maybe we don't want to understand either ... she's evil, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 8:58:00 AM

Thank you my friend. But this was kind of having fun with some of the headlines here in the U.S. I appreciate your kindness though, always Anne-Lise. You are a good friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/5/2020 6:01:00 PM

First of all, it was disgrace what she did! Secondly , why people are blind to all the MANY accomplishments he has made that are good for our country is beyond me!! Well done Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 7:30:00 AM

Thanks so much Heidi. It is sad, that's for sure.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/5/2020 4:47:00 PM

Love the humor . You know, when you sit on the fence you can see both sides. From where I'm sitting the grass looks the same. The livestock is different but the grass is the same.

Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 4:56:00 PM

That's funny, I like that. Thanks my friend. I know this isn't my best work but I just couldn't pass up the headline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/5/2020 1:57:00 PM

LOL I thought perhaps she had torn up their wedding certificate. Great surprise ending. Really enjoyed the humor at the end, Chris. Hugs, Carolyn

Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 1:59:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn, just having a little fun with the headlines.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/5/2020 1:38:00 PM

Well, if it's any consolation, I think you are too good for her ;)

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/5/2020 1:57:00 PM

I agree

Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 1:53:00 PM

Thanks, I feel much better now. : ) I appreciate your visit P.S.

Hannah Borke

Date: 2/5/2020 1:31:00 PM

After reading your poem not knowing what you were talking about, I looked up “tore news”. Shocking. Nancy lost and is reacting like a child. But it’s understandable after months of her toil went up in smoke. Is there a riddle to your poem? I’ll guess: Did your wife once stand in front of you and rip the marriage contract?

Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 1:36:00 PM

No, nothing like that...just having a little fun with the current news. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/5/2020 1:18:00 PM

She is a disgrace for most of her actions. And it’s a shame she can’t be fired but one day soon the last laugh will be on us ... so many wonderful things I have not only heard his words but am living proof of the changes :). Love the poem. Great metaphor

Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 1:35:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandy. I am happy you liked my attempt at humor.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/5/2020 12:47:00 PM

In a different job, she’d be fired for her lack of civil behavior. What a horrible example to our country and of our country. White apparel isn’t always for the good guys.

Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 1:35:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim. : ) I think you are right.

Lin Lane

Date: 2/5/2020 12:16:00 PM

Not so subtle this time, Chris (lol), and because you'll take this as it was meant to match your meaning... He turned away from me from the very start... contempt plastered all over his smug face... but I didn't allow his words to break my heart... I tore them up thinking they were a disgrace

Lin Lane
Date: 2/5/2020 12:21:00 PM

Gonna go there, huh? lol ok and you're welcome.

Chris Green
Date: 2/5/2020 12:19:00 PM

Why whatever do you mean? :) Thanks Lin.