She Took Me On a Moonbeam

She took me on a moonbeam She took me on a moonbeam I held her neath its light The stars sang sweet surrender in echoes on the night Of comet tail desires her lips ignite my skin Enchanted constellations blushing once again Angelic woven heavens draped softly on the sky Velvet folds of ecstasy of whispers floating by Within her gaze I tremble exquisitely designed Lost amidst the rapture her moistened love divine Seductive contemplation in misted dreams come true Along the vast horizon beguiling evening view In sighs that softly quiver we intertwine as one Drifting through the galaxy beyond the rising sun Good night Soupers. Have a great weekend. See you on Monday

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Date: 12/11/2016 8:44:00 PM
I agree with Nette! you have the gift of the romantic pen!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thanks so very much Arthur
Date: 12/11/2016 2:35:00 PM
ohh, with this charming piece, it's V day all the time, chris... huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Nette, sometimes it does feel that way. :)
Date: 12/11/2016 9:11:00 AM
Wow! Sounds like on heckuva weekend;-)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:52:00 AM
It was. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 12/11/2016 5:53:00 AM
Just lovely Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Gary
Date: 12/10/2016 7:36:00 PM
A stirring and engrossing description of enduring love.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:52:00 AM
Thanks so very much Roy. I am thrilled you liked it.
Date: 12/10/2016 9:38:00 AM
So romantic so beautiful Chris-great rhyme to your poem. love phyl
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so very much Phyllis
Date: 12/10/2016 8:53:00 AM
Sensually ethereal, that fourth verse shot me over a moonbeam and back. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
I'm happy you managed to make it back. :) Thanks so much Paloma.
Date: 12/9/2016 8:32:00 PM
another lovely gem here. You are sure good at these, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea. I am glad you liked this.
Date: 12/9/2016 7:33:00 PM
Wonderful, Chris! 7
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim.
Date: 12/9/2016 6:45:00 PM
A great poem Chris, I really liked it :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so very much Claudia, I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 12/9/2016 6:21:00 PM
Have a great weekend too mate! A great poem!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Rick.
Date: 12/9/2016 6:17:00 PM
Let me be the first to say this poem takes me into dreaming.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 8:48:00 AM
I am happy it does. Thank you for your kind thoughts.
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