Chris Green Poet Rhyme

She Took Me On a Moonbeam

She took me on a moonbeam

She took me on a moonbeam
I held her neath its light
The stars sang sweet surrender
in echoes on the night

Of comet tail desires
her lips ignite my skin
Enchanted constellations
blushing once again

Angelic woven heavens
draped softly on the sky
Velvet folds of ecstasy
of whispers floating by

Within her gaze I tremble
exquisitely designed
Lost amidst the rapture
her moistened love divine

Seductive contemplation
in misted dreams come true
Along the vast horizon
beguiling evening view

In sighs that softly quiver
we intertwine as one
Drifting through the galaxy
beyond the rising sun


Good night Soupers. Have a great weekend. See you on Monday

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Arthur Vaso December 11, 2016 at 8:44 PM I agree with Nette! you have the gift of the romantic pen! Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:53 AM Thanks so very much Arthur

Nette Onclaud December 11, 2016 at 2:35 PM ohh, with this charming piece, it's V day all the time, chris... huggs Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:53 AM Thank you Nette, sometimes it does feel that way. :)

Lim'Rik Flats December 11, 2016 at 9:11 AM Wow! Sounds like on heckuva weekend;-) Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:52 AM It was. :) Thanks so much my friend.

Gary Smith December 11, 2016 at 5:53 AM Just lovely Chris :) Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thanks so much Gary

Roy Merritt December 10, 2016 at 7:36 PM A stirring and engrossing description of enduring love. Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thanks so very much Roy. I am thrilled you liked it.

Phyllis Babcock December 10, 2016 at 9:38 AM So romantic so beautiful Chris-great rhyme to your poem. love phyl Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:51 AM Thanks so very much Phyllis

Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 8:53 AM Sensually ethereal, that fourth verse shot me over a moonbeam and back. :) Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:50 AM I'm happy you managed to make it back. :) Thanks so much Paloma.

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2016 at 8:32 PM another lovely gem here. You are sure good at these, Chris. Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:50 AM Thanks so much Andrea. I am glad you liked this.

Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2016 at 7:33 PM Wonderful, Chris! 7 Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:50 AM Thanks so very much Kim.

Claudia Polydoro December 9, 2016 at 6:45 PM A great poem Chris, I really liked it :) Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:50 AM Thanks so very much Claudia, I am thrilled you liked this one.

White Wolf December 9, 2016 at 6:21 PM Have a great weekend too mate! A great poem! Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:49 AM Thanks so much Rick.

Sunlite Wanter December 9, 2016 at 6:17 PM Let me be the first to say this poem takes me into dreaming. Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 8:48 AM I am happy it does. Thank you for your kind thoughts.