She Tenderly Grows

Beneath the sunlit willow lies a rose, a pink surprise in the morning dew light, fresh and quietly she tenderly grows. She's as sensitive as a poet's prose, God’s gifted us with a marvelous sight, beneath the sunlit willow lies a rose. Yesterday morn’ in comfort she arose, petals flourishing in God’s sweet delight, fresh and quietly she tenderly grows. She enlivens with day beams when morose, blooms with elegance like pigeons in flight, beneath the sunlit willow lies a rose. During sundown when she decides to close, she sleeps gently throughout the starlit night, fresh and quietly she tenderly grows. Nourishing beauty when she does expose, blossoming with efflorescence so bright, beneath the sunlit willow lies a rose, fresh and quietly she tenderly grows. Date Written: June 19, 2016
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Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 6:54 PM
A fave for me! Congrats, Luloo!
Ashley Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Hi Laura, I just love the graceful repetition of your lovely poem. A fav for me :) Congratulations!
Krampe Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:22 PM
Beautiful and tender - congrats on your placement, luloo.
Quigley Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Beautifully written. Congrats!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Lovely, congrats.
Roper Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Laura, congratulations on the contest! :-) Thank you for the Cong . Hugs Eve
Teagan Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Very nice, Laura! I bet this will do well for the contest. Hugs
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 8:43 AM
ohh, this flows with ease and beauty, lou... a splendid write!...huggs
Raina Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Such a beautiful write Laura....I enjoyed reading it...good luck in the contest!
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:32 PM
wow, this one is really good. I did rose and so did a few others I saw. I am really loving the rose ones!!
Scars Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:14 PM
thank you lovely Andrea :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Very beautiful LooLu good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:14 PM
thank you lady :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Beautiful written,Laura, a winner Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:13 PM
thank you very much Eve :)-luloo
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