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She Tenderly Grows

Beneath the sunlit willow lies a rose, a pink surprise in the morning dew light, fresh and quietly she tenderly grows. She's as sensitive as a poet's prose, God’s gifted us with a marvelous sight, beneath the sunlit willow lies a rose. Yesterday morn’ in comfort she arose, petals flourishing in God’s sweet delight, fresh and quietly she tenderly grows. She enlivens with day beams when morose, blooms with elegance like pigeons in flight, beneath the sunlit willow lies a rose. During sundown when she decides to close, she sleeps gently throughout the starlit night, fresh and quietly she tenderly grows. Nourishing beauty when she does expose, blossoming with efflorescence so bright, beneath the sunlit willow lies a rose, fresh and quietly she tenderly grows. Date Written: June 19, 2016

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Date: 8/3/2017 6:54:00 PM
A fave for me! Congrats, Luloo!
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Date: 8/3/2017 5:31:00 PM
Hi Laura, I just love the graceful repetition of your lovely poem. A fav for me :) Congratulations!
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Date: 8/3/2017 3:22:00 PM
Beautiful and tender - congrats on your placement, luloo.
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Date: 7/1/2016 6:47:00 PM
Beautifully written. Congrats!
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Date: 7/1/2016 9:44:00 AM
Lovely, congrats.
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Date: 6/30/2016 11:01:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on the contest! :-) Thank you for the Cong . Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/20/2016 9:47:00 AM
Very nice, Laura! I bet this will do well for the contest. Hugs
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Date: 6/20/2016 8:43:00 AM
ohh, this flows with ease and beauty, lou... a splendid write!...huggs
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Date: 6/19/2016 6:21:00 PM
Such a beautiful write Laura....I enjoyed reading it...good luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:32:00 PM
wow, this one is really good. I did rose and so did a few others I saw. I am really loving the rose ones!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/19/2016 6:14:00 PM
thank you lovely Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 6/19/2016 5:31:00 PM
Very beautiful LooLu good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/19/2016 6:14:00 PM
thank you lady :)-luloo
Date: 6/19/2016 3:53:00 PM
Beautiful written,Laura, a winner Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/19/2016 6:13:00 PM
thank you very much Eve :)-luloo

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