She Stood

So frustrated so Irritated with a man who constantly beats her emotional feelings 
out of this world,
She Stood & took all his might from his fist to the face & practicly took her dreams 
for him.
Patiently waiting for her strength to gather to a power that was bargained from 
him,
She Stood near the wall & heard all the threats almost nearer for death for 
herself.
Complain that this woman lost her glance when the man swung deep into her 
gut,
She Stood frequently & terribly fell to the ground with dried eyes so much was 
going wrong & all she wanted was a perfect place like no other than heaven,
She Stood & tried to take her life with the rifal he stood near & reached a hand of 
threat that had her feared.
Don't take, Don't Take! its just alittle too late to say those sweet generous words 
of  his she walked away,
She stood there brutally wishing for the day of her life to come.
He hit, he kicked, he yelled, he put her down, he pulled the hair, she pleeded, 
she begged, she prayed,
She stood still & wished on a shooting star for her first time the wish has been 
granted but to the end of it, it was all to late for her, the man of her dreams took 
her life by his own hands,
She Stood with God and finally cried her undried tears.

Sincerely, 
Heather aka
NaturesWorld
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006


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