She Slips On Slippery Slope

She swims on streaming sonata of spring song, 
sailing slow sings solo in squall surge so strong,
slips on sheer slippery slope of sticky silt sheets,
on split Sitar of snapped strings she sourly sits. 

December 25, 2020
Contest : Tongue Twister Challenge
Sponsor : Joe Sandler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Radhakrishna Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 12:12 PM
quite a good one and tremendous alliteration!! all words from s and it is a tongue twister! congrats on your win!!
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