She Skips Stones Upon the Sea

Your eye's light shines like our moon, her moon...
she skips stones upon the sea--

...although we're just dancing 
between the idea of shadows.

How can I hold the soul of a girl while
she's walking little stars on a string?
The night sea crashes as the moon,
at lightspeed; paints a Picasso upon every wave.

Open your celestial door and help me walk.

Sweeter words have flown,
but these are the only words I've ever known.
I'm so tired of chasing dark shadows
that disappear in the warm morning sun.

Some just wake up and walk out my door--

It makes my face grow longer as
the world turns me to face my
forty seventh winter wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 11:06 AM
So lovely... This is deeply moving...
Godwin Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Beautiful and even a haunting element that pulled me in ... CayCay
A  Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Hi Red, a stunning write. I'm touched by your the words you pour from your soul. SKAT
Manassian Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Very emotional piece here, Red. I'm one winter ahead of you....It's hard to deal with time passing...and certain needs remaining. Lovely write.
Bateman Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 1:32 PM
Hello Red!! As promised, I dropped by to check out your poetry. This is a very interesting Blank Verse write. I really like the subtle message of your poem here. This one has a certain mesmerizing quality to it. The technique with the lead-off verse before each stanza is great. A "7" + "FAV" for sure. Best Always, Gary
Nance Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 11:18 AM
I am enjoying your style, topics that hold a strange emotional twist you bring a breath of beauty and a touch of the pain. I am hooked on your pen.
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