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She Sits Alone

She sits alone On a rock on the shore Where days before She sat with one more Her boyfriend her love On holiday When fate befell On this tragic day Swimming and enjoying The times of their lives Two dived in Only one survived She still sits alone On this rock on the shore She will do it next year Like the year before http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2010 11:24:00 AM
I sit alone on many days.That's when my thoughts come out.Thank you for your comment on my poem.Hope you are well.
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Date: 4/12/2010 5:43:00 PM
Thank you for this remembrance, James. It was a heartbreaking experience and you captured my feelings well. Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2010 4:15:00 PM
When you loose someone you love..you..loose all...this poem carries so much feeling..Charma
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:03:00 PM
Oh so sad this tragic event for sweet Carolyn ... a fitting tribute to her endurance and a good friend to feel her pain... great write Highlander...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:37:00 PM
Interesting write but sad for love loss but romantic that she will always remember him...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:05:00 PM
enjoyed ...romantic
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:46:00 PM
I find this a bit sad for her. Thank you. Enjoyed!
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Date: 4/11/2010 3:38:00 PM
very touching, well written
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