She Sits Alone

She sits alone
On a rock on the shore
Where days before
She sat with one more

Her boyfriend her love
On holiday
When fate befell
On this tragic day

Swimming and enjoying
The times of their lives
Two dived in
Only one survived

She still sits alone
On this rock on the shore
She will do it next year
Like the year before




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Date: 4/13/2010 11:24:00 AM
I sit alone on many days.That's when my thoughts come out.Thank you for your comment on my poem.Hope you are well.
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Date: 4/12/2010 5:43:00 PM
Thank you for this remembrance, James. It was a heartbreaking experience and you captured my feelings well. Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2010 4:15:00 PM
When you loose someone you love..you..loose all...this poem carries so much feeling..Charma
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:03:00 PM
Oh so sad this tragic event for sweet Carolyn ... a fitting tribute to her endurance and a good friend to feel her pain... great write Highlander...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:37:00 PM
Interesting write but sad for love loss but romantic that she will always remember him...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:05:00 PM
enjoyed ...romantic
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:46:00 PM
I find this a bit sad for her. Thank you. Enjoyed!
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Date: 4/11/2010 3:38:00 PM
very touching, well written
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