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She Sipped

He shook glass Screamed silence Ran the walls She sipped He slammed his hands Despised his frustration Feared his need She sipped He called to her Begged of her Held out in hope for her She sipped He broke apart Came undone Was no more She sipped

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/2/2012 1:15:00 PM

Nicely done! The contrast between the anguish and the feeling of indifference is brought out very well.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2012 11:24:00 AM

Welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well - I like this poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 5:30:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Dee. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Sabrina Robillard

Date: 10/23/2012 3:28:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Very well written. :)