She Sails

A Kigo Three Quarter Moon Porcelain Ovaloid Sailing midnight seas.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/25/2019 5:27:00 AM

I am currently wearing an ovaloid and had no idea I was until I got my dictionary out, so thank you for another M.L. word lesson today. And now I am diving in to see what a kigo is. According to Google a Kigo is vacation rental software, so there must be something else....

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/25/2019 11:54:00 AM

Ha, thanks. It is a form of a Haiku, usually about nature and the seasons. It can have up to 17 syllables. At least this one is...I can't vouch for the vacation spots, as I've not used them before. (Just don't buy any land from them unless you have a lawyer look it over first).

W.A. Cholt

Date: 4/24/2019 8:02:00 PM

Vivid, powerful images.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/24/2019 11:19:00 PM

Thank you

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/24/2019 7:18:00 PM

Lovely imagery.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/24/2019 11:19:00 PM

Thanks