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She Said Yes

2017 comes to an end I'm happy to be with my best friend As you know her name is josette The best friend a man could get Loyal loving and great fun Have a laugh in the rain or sun My life my world she truly is Now world you need to listen to this On Christmas day she opened her prize A diamond ring twinkled in her eyes With a little note on the side Will you marry me be my bride With a tear shed in her eye If she were Scottish she just said aye But in English the words did flow The answer world was not no It was a big Yes to my big act I love her so much that is a fact United together we will now be Forever and ever total unity So friends and family we wish you well 2018 I hope will be swell I know my years get better and better Even if the weather is wetter and wetter Happy new year from my fiance and I I'm as happy as a man eating ale pie

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Date: 2/14/2018 1:40:00 PM
Hello Gordon, I just read your poem. I wish the both of you plenty of happiness always. When is the special day? Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/27/2017 8:28:00 PM
I don't know if it is true, but it is a darn cute poem and I loved reading it. Good job with the cute and fun delivery of such a serious subject. If this is true, may happiness be on your pillow each night and joy at the foot of your bed! Congrats. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Gordon Alexander
Date: 12/28/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thankyou for your kind words and yes it is true and I'm glad you liked it Gordon
Date: 12/27/2017 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations.
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Gordon Alexander
Date: 12/28/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thankyou

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