She Said She's From New Orleans

Im caught up in her spell and loving this enchantment
For her Id walk through hell and embrace my entrapment
Im exploring her lips and the curve of her hips
A heartbeat that skips with her I'm selfish

I pull passionate emotions from all her expressions
Breathing it shortens when she looks in my direction
I pursue her relentlesss I'll never be finished
Somethin like brakeless damn near cant take this

Now all the way breathless left behind cautious
Wanting her closeness her beauty is flawless

Now I think Im the one blushin 
cause my cheeks are sure doin somethin, 
If this a crush Im all the way crushed in
 
You usin them words like loves weapon 
A gun aint got nothin on you not even smith an wesson 
Ima call you gods greatest blessin 
You can be my angel Im on your highway to heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/6/2012 1:26:00 AM
This is hot!!! love the line " A gun aint got nothin on you not even smith an wesson" Nice one
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Sha'Ntez Jefferson
Date: 10/6/2012 9:59:00 AM
Thank you much appreciated
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