She Said

She said "Hi ya"
I replied "Lower"

She hailed "Hello"
I sighed "Goodbye"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 3:12 AM
Funny xx
Palmer Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 7:23 AM
ha ha ha ,thanks for the laugh,nice write Brian
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 10:57 AM
A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Brian. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 3:22 AM
Cute.....Brian.....goodbye......- oxox Anne-Lise
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