She Said

Who will take care of me
who will tuck me in at bedtime
who will wake me up in the morning
'who will' was in every question that she had
along with the truly innocent flow of tears of motherly need 
when I parted her from me for the first time 
on march 21st 2010

who will say goodnight momsi
who will lay an arm around me and 
who will sing along with me at night
'who will' was in every question that I had
along with the true hearted love of a mother
when I lay here alone with litte darlings thoughts
on march 21st 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lay's "My Children" contest Hina. Love, Carol
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June 23, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Congratulations on a lovely heartfelt poem. Love, Joyce
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June 23, 2011 at 6:04 PM
Congrats Hina on your wonderful winning poem in children contest with this precious piece luv..enjoy..
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 11:43 AM
I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Hina. Love, Carol
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