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She gives a loud sigh After five minutes of love She said it was fine What ever it was So you thought it was nothing When you said go ahead Take me to heaven On our marital bed Gee, thanks Was that all you had That's okay I'm hormonal glad Don't worry about it I got it at last I've down loaded the instructions It should give you a blast Thank you my dear I just don't give a dam It's a stallion i want Not a worn out ram

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2010 7:07:00 AM
So silly but serious
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Date: 2/23/2010 1:15:00 AM
LOL! LOL! so funny, love Simone
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Date: 2/22/2010 9:08:00 PM
haha. that last stanza is priceless. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/22/2010 1:08:00 PM
you have truly made my day wit this piece. wonderfully hilarious. great piece
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:16:00 AM
James I must say you made my day. Thank you for sharing this humorous write. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win...Jimmy
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Date: 2/21/2010 8:49:00 PM
Oh my God............sorry for who?
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:02:00 PM
You really had me laughing out loud, especially with the last verse. You seem to understand women so well. This poem could have been written from a woman's perspective. Wish we'd done it as a co-write because we both would have been laughing ourselves silly. Love, Carolyn (Yes, Yes, give us the stallions!)
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Date: 2/21/2010 4:46:00 PM
Amazing and adorably cute and fun filled .. luv that last verse... enjoyable to read right before retiring... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry today James... u blog was quite impressive... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/21/2010 4:37:00 PM
I enjoyed this humoros poem..'after five mins of love,she said it was fine':)I'm hormonal glad:)..downloading instructions..and the ending is spectecular..This lady seems to be wild,let her have it all the stallion way:)Funny indeed...hilarious..Charma
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