James Fraser Poet Rhyme

She Said

She gives a loud sigh
After five minutes of love
She said it was fine
What ever it was

   So you thought it was nothing
   When you said go ahead
   Take me to heaven
   On our marital bed

Gee, thanks
Was that all you had
That's okay
I'm hormonal glad

   Don't worry about it
   I got it at last
   I've down loaded the instructions
   It should give you a blast

Thank you my dear
I just don't give a dam
It's a stallion i want
Not a worn out ram

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Susan Palli February 23, 2010 at 7:07 AM So silly but serious

Simone Segal February 23, 2010 at 1:15 AM LOL! LOL! so funny, love Simone

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2010 at 9:08 PM haha. that last stanza is priceless. LUv, Andrea

Monica Nealy February 22, 2010 at 1:08 PM you have truly made my day wit this piece. wonderfully hilarious. great piece

Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2010 at 10:16 AM James I must say you made my day. Thank you for sharing this humorous write. Love, Carol

Jimmy Anderson February 22, 2010 at 10:03 AM Congrats on your win...Jimmy

David Byrne February 21, 2010 at 8:49 PM Oh my God............sorry for who?

Carolyn Devonshire February 21, 2010 at 6:02 PM You really had me laughing out loud, especially with the last verse. You seem to understand women so well. This poem could have been written from a woman's perspective. Wish we'd done it as a co-write because we both would have been laughing ourselves silly. Love, Carolyn (Yes, Yes, give us the stallions!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 21, 2010 at 4:46 PM Amazing and adorably cute and fun filled .. luv that last verse... enjoyable to read right before retiring... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry today James... u blog was quite impressive... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop February 21, 2010 at 4:37 PM I enjoyed this humoros poem..'after five mins of love,she said it was fine':)I'm hormonal glad:)..downloading instructions..and the ending is spectecular..This lady seems to be wild,let her have it all the stallion way:)Funny indeed...hilarious..Charma