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She Proved Her Point

All she wanted to do was to prove her point. What goes up must come down – She packed climbing gear and grabbed her ballpoint. It was time for the dauntless doubter’s meltdown! Standing at the bottom of a mountain, She looked up to the highest point. Hoping it would not rain, She headed for the first checkpoint. Then, stopped to rest and write some poetry. About life from her viewpoint – She heard the voice of the Almighty. And wrote heavenly thoughts He did appoint. She started climbing again, aches in every joint. Past her breakpoint and the midpoint to the endpoint. She dropped her pen; it bounced down the mountain. Over rocks, nooks, and crannies…proving her point. © January 18, 2011

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Date: 1/19/2011 2:48:00 PM
How profound, Dane Ann! I bow before your genius. I have been unable to come up with anything semi-suitable for this contest, but you...you moved mountains to prove your point!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 1:42:00 PM
talk about over kill! lol T, S.
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:49:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Dane Ann. It was a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today and I hope you will continue to write and enter the contets with your wonderful poetry.. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
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