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She Possesses Me

She possesses me like a fire possesses the devil She possesses me like a Harley possesses its metal She lures me like a child is lured to candy She lures me like Indians lured by Gandhi I'm usually strong but with her I go weak Under her spell my mind starts to leak Controlled by her charms Willingly with no qualms I follow her like a cult obsessed freak She possesses me like an owner possesses a dog She possesses me like a termite possesses a log She lures me like a moth is lured to light She lures me like a bat is lured by night I'm usually strong but with her I go weak Under her spell my mind starts to leak Controlled by her charms Willingly with no qualms I follow her like a cult obsessed freak

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Angie Thomas

Date: 5/5/2014 3:56:00 AM

I really liked this poem. (especially the Indians lured by gandhi part :P). It's really sweet.

Linda Jackson

Date: 4/6/2014 1:53:00 PM

Excellent. I think the poem is wonderful. I like the repetition and the rhyming. In awe. Best wishes Linda.

Rob Carter
Date: 4/7/2014 3:52:00 PM

Thanks Linda. Rob

Amy Green

Date: 4/6/2014 10:37:00 AM

She possesses me like a Harley possesses its metal, I really love that line. Nice gem you have here.

Rob Carter
Date: 4/6/2014 1:52:00 PM

Thanks Amy, its all tongue in cheek, I imagine a spandex clad 80s rock band singing it! Rob