She Played

She played one more time for Papa,
as to make the Angels weep.
His frail, arthritic hand,
upon the bed rail, tapped a beat.

His rhuemy eyes in sunken cheeks,
never waivers from her face.
His blue lips in silent tribute,
sang the words to Amazing Grace.

Her eyes closed to the rapture,
her Violin did sing.
She did not see, yet she felt,
when Papa stopped breathing.


Placement: 2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 5:21 AM
A belated congratulations Paula on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 10:08 AM
sweet congrats paula on your win; a pleasure to re-read this! correction on my post below :" sentiments that WRAP".. it's not funny anymore--the way i make these darn typing errors.. hope you are feeling better :) huggs!
Cooper Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 9:59 AM
lovey pen
Johnson Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 7:33 AM
A lovely little picture of life in the prsence of death. Congratulations,Paula. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:48 AM
Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in the contest with this dynamic entry so creative my friend.. oh enjoy another great big win for wonderful poetry ..
Onclaud Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 9:36 AM
oh paula... deep sentiments that wraps my soul blue an dgentle... remembering my dad who had passed on.. a beauty! :) huggs, nette
Ball Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Oh what a poignant piece this is. Excellent imagery. What a wonderful thing she did for him in his last moments. Superb Stuff. God Bless, JB
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