She Planned To Save Them All

I will save them all
I will take them out of this hovel.
I will rescue children one at a time.
They are babies, after all. Helpless before I arrived.

It is her first day as a social worker.
She is proud, of her degree, and her badge.
Makes her first home visit. Calls her supervisor, concerned.
Supervisor seems bored, uninterested.
Next call to the police.

A young policeman arrives. Walks through the filthy apartment
Where the young mother is living with a newborn and a crying toddler.
“You are doing the best you can,” he tells the woman. “Thank you for letting us in.”
He asks if she needs anything. She is grateful for his attitude and concern.

Freshly out-of-school social worker is incredulous.
This is not how it was supposed to go. She was going to save them.
She feels defeated. “It is a rat’s nest!” she argues as she gets out to the police car.
“We cannot leave them here!”

“If you can do something to help the mother, please do,” he replies.
“She is overwhelmed, and can use a little kindness. She loves her children.”
Teaching her gently that her job is not as black and white 
As she had been taught in classes by those who have never been social workers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 4/29/2019 11:50:00 PM
Good one :)
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Date: 4/29/2019 3:34:00 PM
BINGO! You got that right!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2019 11:07:00 PM
I observe and wham. A poem!
Date: 4/29/2019 1:33:00 PM
We need more people like this in the world!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2019 11:07:00 PM
Yes, we do, and I have met many.
Date: 4/29/2019 1:17:00 PM
Barnevern. That's what it says on the gate to the juvenile hell.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2019 11:07:00 PM
The "gate to juvenile hell" - may I please steal this line for a poem?
Date: 4/29/2019 12:39:00 PM
Ain't that the truth
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2019 11:08:00 PM
It truly is! Just a little empathy, folks. That is all we ask!
Date: 4/29/2019 10:02:00 AM
Great Narrative Caren. I related to it because in my experience, getting a teachers degree did in no way,, prepare me for teaching in the Chicago Public Schools. It was heartbreaking and horrendous. Teaching in San Francisco was a God send. I could teach there. Instead of being the umpire at classroom shenanigans in Chicago. Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2019 11:09:00 PM
Hahahaha I know what you are about. I was in Chicago for nine years.
Date: 4/29/2019 7:02:00 AM
Yes, when reality sets in...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2019 11:09:00 PM
And it does, and we have to not only keep it "real" but keep it "kind".
Date: 4/29/2019 6:09:00 AM
social worker she is; socially she saves all!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2019 11:09:00 PM
Yes, the idealism is not the same as the practicality.
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