She of Flavorful Beauty

I feel a bit of envy – hue chartreuse-
when she, like a tart (sweet lemon with lime)
walks in; all the boys she seems to enthuse.
Tangerine words turn them crimson each time,
for saffron’s her voice! Her lavender eyes
flirt brightly like coral lining a sea
of aquamarine! But oh, how she lies!
The sugar of watermelon has she,
but under her flesh there lies a heart black.
I’ve seen it, and yet, they’re all taken in
by flavorful beauty – that which I lack!
Can they not see what lies under the skin?
Lilac may trail her, and heads still will turn,
but one day her true pitch-dark essence they’ll learn.

April 14, 2021
For Brian Strand's
Your Option Again Poetry Contest

Note: Your poem must include all of the following ten colors/words:
aquamarine, crimson, chartreuse, coral, lavender, lemon, lilac, saffron, tangerine, and watermelon.
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Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. I am delighted to see it there. Thank you for sharing..Sara
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 3:22 PM
Wow! Congratulations, Andrea. You have really mastered the sonnet-format - it comes so easily to you! A very different approach with the theme! Wonderful! Love ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 9:42 AM
"Hue chartreuse" - absolutely wonderful Andrea! Wonderful opening that leads us right into the ever changing kaleidoscope of colorful, vivid emotions. Sending you a rainbow of congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend!
Pinet Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a fun contest to judge and your emotional, color infused poem, successfully caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
Laurie Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:33 PM
Hello Andrea ... a fine sonnet using the words provided, and well positioned so not appear forced - well done Andrea - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 4:51 AM
A kaleidoscope of colours , each one portraying a characteristic but oh my "one day her true pitch-dark essence they'll learn" A charming poem to read. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Horsman Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 7:03 AM
This is going straight to my favourites Andrea, i've always believed you to be the Queen of sonnets, but this although so different, excels, the skin deep attributes are so well portrayed here. And the last line weaves it all together so clever.
Jayasankar Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 2:19 AM
Great usage of all the words for the contest Andrea... Loved your take in the contest Andrea... Best wishes...Hugs...~ Ani
Buhagiar Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 11:34 PM
Some people are double faced. You did well with the colors.
May Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 8:45 PM
She has them beguiled, Very nicely penned Andrea..
Ball Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 8:15 PM
WoW This really is a clever write. Well done my friend. Good luck in the contest. This is an excellent entry. God Bless, JB
Theraven Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:52 PM
Andrea, 'when she, like a tart (sweet lemon with lime) walks in; all the boys she seems to enthuse.' Much enjoyed your changing colors. -Richard
Hankins Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Very well-written imagery employing the colors required by the contest. Nice job, Andrea. You can't miss.
Mchattie Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Well done. You put on your clever pants this morning. Well done my friend. Have a great day.
Milgate Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Great poem wonderful use of color.
Pandit Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 4:03 PM
She was flavorful and colorful---well done with so many colors nicely blended in your poem, Andrea.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 3:13 PM
WOW! This is brilliant.. so rich with COLOR.. vibrant like the light that twinkles in passion's eyes. A blessing to read. I love it and am sure you'll win with this beautiful sonnet. God bless you sweet lady... Love, Gina
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