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She Made My Eyes Pop Out

A little woman made my eyes pop out She has got me ensnared without a doubt Oh how she looks so fine I want to make her mine To call her, do I have to scream and shout?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/3/2011 1:46:00 PM
lol! Congratulations on your fine win in Adeleke's Contest, Robert. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:56:00 PM
Hey Robert, good to see you in the top ten. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored ninth place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win....Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Robert. You had one of the cutest ones!
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:49:00 PM
Lovely poem Robert. many hearty congrats for this victory.
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congrats Robert on your big win in the Unspeakable Love contest with yet another amazng entry luv.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with a good friend and great talent as yours luv..
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congrats Robert on your win in this contest with this nice Limerick---kashinath
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Adeleke, Robert
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:26:00 AM
Wow ! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your placement in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke!
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Date: 2/21/2011 7:51:00 AM
...creativee
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Date: 2/15/2011 10:11:00 PM
Cute one, Robert.
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:03:00 PM
cute limerick , whispering might work better though
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Date: 2/15/2011 2:29:00 PM
I think screaming would only repel her, Robert. Men are so shy sometimes, but it doesn't take that much courage to introduce yourself. Heck, I've had men happy that I took the initiative to make the first contact. If this is for Adeleke's contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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