She Made My Eyes Pop Out

A little woman made my eyes pop out
She has got me ensnared without a doubt
Oh how she looks so fine
I want to make her mine
To call her, do I have to scream and shout?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 1:46 PM
lol! Congratulations on your fine win in Adeleke's Contest, Robert. Always, Annalise
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest Robert. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Hey Robert, good to see you in the top ten. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored ninth place win. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on your win....Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:54 PM
Congratulations, Robert. You had one of the cutest ones!
Mannan Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Lovely poem Robert. many hearty congrats for this victory.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Congrats Robert on your big win in the Unspeakable Love contest with yet another amazng entry luv.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with a good friend and great talent as yours luv..
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Congrats Robert on your win in this contest with this nice Limerick---kashinath
Mehta Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Adeleke, Robert
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February 26, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Wow ! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your placement in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke!
Wells Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 7:51 AM
...creativee
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 10:11 PM
Cute one, Robert.
Roberts Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 4:03 PM
cute limerick , whispering might work better though
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February 15, 2011 at 2:29 PM
I think screaming would only repel her, Robert. Men are so shy sometimes, but it doesn't take that much courage to introduce yourself. Heck, I've had men happy that I took the initiative to make the first contact. If this is for Adeleke's contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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